Mark and Candace- a story of how two friends become something more

Ok ppl, this is my first time writing a story kind of thing. Plz comment and tell me if u like it and if u want me to write more. There's only one story, not two, so to read it in order click "Mark" first and then when u get to results read Mark pt 2 ok? Thanx!!!! (Also give me feed back on where you think the story should go or if I should write things that should go before it.)