Immortal Rose ( A Edward Cullen story :] ) {1} (Girls only!)

Hey! This is my first story ,so it might not be good :[ I just wanted to see if anyone liked it ! :] Bella's not in this story,so sorry to you Bella lovers hehe :P Anyways ,It's my first,so plz dont be ..mean ,hehe . Sorry it's short,the 2nd one will be long! Well ,I love hearing your guys comments ,so comment ! I want atleast 5 GOOD comments to make the 2nd one,i'll post it if I have only a few readers! :) I already have some of it written so I could post the 2nd one whenever you guys want! :]]