An Untitled Song That I Wrote(Please Read!)

Ok, here is part of another song that I wrote(I'm still working on it, I just want some opinions. There is only verse one and the chorus, so its really short.). TO TAYLOR, SELENA, AND DEMI- Please comment on what you think about it, because it would mean the world to me :) Comments from other people are appreciated too! BTW- Can anybody help me think of a name? I usually can think of a name, but this time I can't! THANKS!