Do you like this poem?

I'm fading into darknees, whoever I was is quickly being forgotten.
I'm screaming, but everyone ignores the sound.
My tears never even make it to the ground.
The pain wraps around me, the only thing I can feel.
I take a step backwards, away from what is real.
I am just a shadow to the world, the memory of someone lost.
Drifting through the world, the embodiment of a broken heart.