what do you think of my poem?

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Hide and seek

the obscurity
hides the purity
intentions clouded
true meanings shrouded
I have lost my sight
I can't think
the pain is to tight
wrapped around my soul
I’m stuck in a black hole
sucking the life from my body
tucking under a rug just so I can't find it
unfair, unsafe, unstable
hiding under a table
running from life
only to be found by the pain
I can run but I can't hide
it always wins
in spite of my fight.....

  1. 1

    okay so what did you think?

  2. 2

    should i put more poetry up here for others to read?

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