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Elena and Damian have known each other since fourth grade.When they are 14 they start dating.When a conflict arrises between them they always settle it quickly.But when Damian changes the date on his birth certificate and plans on joining the army Elena gets very angry at him.What will happen when the love of Elena's life leaves her,She gets a letter saying he's dead and her best friends are ignoring her?

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