"She Loves Him" (Poem)

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This is a poem I wrote this morning cause I was bored...I hope you like it...it came from the heart!

"She loves his smile, she loves his eyes, she loves him so much and it's quite a suprise, she loves the way that he talks, she loves the way that he walks, she loves him...why doesn't he love her?"

Plz comment! And be mean if you didn't like it! I wanna know if it's good or not...and if you have any suggestions on what else to say plz tell me!
Thanks!

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