A Fantasy/Adventure Story: The Story Begins

ok so here is the next part because at least 2 people liked the last part.
My brother is writing this story I'm only posting it for him because he asked me to.
I'm posting it how he typed it and I would appreciate it if you would leave comments so I can tell him you like it. or don't
This story is a lot further than mine so this one at least for now will be updated faster than The Begining of My Life with You. only because he's been writing longer
~Passion~aka~Noel~