Saphire (read intro plz!!!)

Okay I know I said I'd never make another quiz again, but I'm a storywriter. This is the only way I can get feedback on the stories I write. So this one's about a girl named Saphire (I like the name, 'kay?). She's a fallen angel I'll switch perspective between the characters, there's three major ones so not to confusing. I almost forgot Lucifer is in this story, so if you hate him don't read this.I'll keep writing it if I get good feedback. ONLY IF!!!!