Jacob Black Loves Me ?! (12)

You looked and were amazed, you kept thinking 'he had done all of this for me ?' then he looked at you concerned and said " aww man ! i knew you wouldnt like it, its not good enough for you, this was supposed to be perfect !" then he began hitting the side of his head "Stupid Jacob, stupid, stupid, Jake-" You interrupted him saying " what ! Jake this is perfect , no one has ever done this for me ...ever." You looked ahead at the sweetest thing. A picknick blanket just at the side of the edge of the mountain. You saw the perfectly lit and placed candles and the beautiful sunset hitting perfectly where you were. You knew he had put thought into it and planned what time to leave so the sunset would hit as soon as you got there. The cute little picknick basket in the middle of the blanket and too pillows for you to sit on on top of the blanket. It was perfect, and you felt so loved. " Jacob Black...you really do love me dont you?...." He looked deep into my eyes as if he were really trying to get this to me. *" ____ of course i love you, why would you even question that ?" you were very quiet trying to think of something to tell him so you wouldnt hurt his feelings. "well Jac-" then you were interrupeted by a a super sweet kiss from the biy you love. It lasted a long time and it was so simple. You trully felt important in his life. "____ , when i first saw yu i fell in love with you, before i was even a ...well ..werewolf..when we were still just colse friends. So i dont want you to think that i only love you just because of the imprinting. My whole life and reason for being here is for you, and only you.You have to believe me-" you interrupted him by giving his a simple and loving kiss and then said " i believe you " your faces were so close and the both of you smiled while he held your waist and you held his face. You could stay like this forever
Then you heard a small squirrel in the bushes and that made you switch back into reality. Jake then said " ok _ how about we enjoy our date and perfect sunset. " you followed after him while he held you hand and you sat across from him you laughed when you sat down and simply said " lets:" with a smile. You guys ate while talking and kissing involved. Eventually he ended up pulling you into his lap and the two of you sat there and watched the sky as the stars appeared. You felt perfect, like nothing could interrupt this moment and the two of you slowly ended up laying down and sleeping in eachothers arms under the stars.

EDWARDS P.O.V
I watched my only love in the arms of that mutt. i cant see why she got mad at me, he had imprinted on her. She cant even choose to love him if he imprints ! When a werewo- ugh a mutt imprints the person is automatically attracted to them, its magical. She loved me before sahe was imprintted upon !! And i am DETERMINED to get my love back.. I stepped a little foward in the bushes to get a better veiw but i made a noise. Itried to read ____ mind to see if she noticed but i forgot that i could no longer do that so i peeked into Jacobs. Thankfully they thought it was just a small aquirrel. O this is perfect theyre asleep ! I have to take __ with me back home..then i can explain everything to her , then ..she will love me again....i just have to go over there and pick her up .....this is my perfect chance....



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