The Nerd In Me
I'm going from too cool for school, to a nerd, just to impress the girl I like
Today, I saw her. Jenny Ankinson. The prettiest girl I've every seen. But every time I look, I can't look at her. She just bothers me. I don't know. She just does. Tommorow is the first day of school. Which I'll write about tommorrow.
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It was pretty decent, but you could have written a little more, you know? Honestly, I liked the main idea of it. Just continue this, and you'll have a great story! :D please check out my new story, "Mercy".
You kinda change tenses a bit.. But Other than that! Great job. :) I can't wait to hear about her family and school and everything. Wait.. Is it a girl? Well, write more soon! :) I like it. :)
no the main chary is a boy.
I thought so.. At first but I wasn't sure... I LOVE IT!!!!!!!! WRITE MORE! :)
write more plz i like