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ok so i lied but i need you guys to read this! it's just a writing sample, i was bored so i did this a year ago... (yea i was smart even as a 12 year old!) but i need you guys to tell me if i should put it in BLACK RAVEN. (if yew don't know what that is, take my other quiz about it and then come back.) of course it'll be for the second book. (book 1: Blaire. book 2: Jesse.) and i'll change the names. what d'ya think? oh! and im starting ya know what? i'll leave it in the comments...