I loathe you SagaIn love again(17) and Lies(18)(read intro)
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Chapter 1
In love again(17)
(OH MY GOSH!!!!!!!! To who all read my story, ur not going to believe this, but I loathe you saga:beautiful romance(16) is the second most popular chapter, and I loathe you is the first mot popular story on quibblo!!!
I cant believe this!!! it's all thanks to you guys!!
Thanks so much!!!!)
My dad must have really liked this girl, she was all he brought up all the time.
She was also, the main person he hung out with.
I liked seeing him this way, it was like once again mom was here.
"Jordyn?" I started when we were in her car on the way to piano lessons.
"yes?"
"Do you think Dad will ever marry Carmen?" I asked her.
She was silent for a few moments.
When I thought she wasnt going to answer, she said:"I'm not sure. I guess will see."
I was happy when piano lessons was canceled, and Jasmine couldnt meet me at the ice cream shop.
Cause I just wanted to stay home, and think.
Of course, that was interrupted when the front door slammed, and two voices started talking.
I walked over to the banister, but ducked quickly when I saw my dad, and Carmen down there.
"This is a nice place." Carmen said admiring it.
"Thanks, my wife, before she died, picked it out." he explained.
Oh my gosh, I'd get to see them on a date!
"Oh, here. Let me take your jacket." he said helping her take it off.
She laughed.
"your being such a gentle man."
He smiled.
"I was raised that way."
They stared for a long time, I thought they were going to kiss, but my dad blushed, and looked away.
"Um, I made dinner. Lasagna." he said walking away.
She seemed upset, like she wanted him to kiss her.
"Oh, ok." she replied following him.
I groaned, they were being silly.
"Italians my favorite." she told him.
"It was Lauren's too."
Something told her that he was upset.
"are you ok?" she asked.
He nodded.
"Yeah, I'm fine. why?"
"I dont know, you just seemed discouraged." she explained.
He bit his lower lip.
"I'll prove it, see I'm fine!" he wailed grabbing Carmen, and spinning hima round.
She laughed as the song love bug came on.
His smile faded, and he looked down at the ground.
"I'm not ok." he admitted.
Her smile faded now too.
"Joe, what's wrong?" she asked concerned.
He sighed.
"This dinner, this house, this song, their all Lauren's favorite things!" he cried, falling onto the couch.
Carmen pursed her lip, then sat next to him.
"you miss her." she observed.
My dad nodded.
"I miss her very much."
She sighed.
"I can relate, my husband was a soldier in Iraqi, he died fighting for his country." she explained.
My dad's eyes fell.
"I'm sorry."
She laughed.
"Theres no need to be, because I'm proud of him, he died my hero." she told him.
He smiled.
"well, so was my wife.
When I first met her, her parents left her behind.
She had mean kids at school, and other things.
She almost died countless times, in different ways.
Ok, she was my trooper, and my hero." he explained.
Her smile widened.
"and now, maybe we can be each others heroes," she said, leaning closer to him.
He leaned closer as well.
"How much of a hero?" he asked.
She wrapped her arms around him.
"I dont know, you tell me."
She leaned in, and placed her lips on his.
My mouth dropped open.
Finally!
This wasnt like the kiss with Heidi, I know that because he was hugging Carmen, and they kissed longer then she did with him.
When he pulled away, he was breathless, and she was amazed.
"I think I might like you being my hero." he admitted sheepishly.
She giggled, and he laughed.
The rest of the night, they no longer acted with an awkward attitude.
They were laughing, and talking, it's as if they've known each other forever.
"I had fun." he told her when she was going to leave.
She smiled.
"i had fun too."
It was silent.
"Well, I better go." she explained sadly.
He nodded.
She leaned in, and kissed him again.
"Goodnight."
"Night."
After she left, I walked down the stairs, and cleared my throat.
Startled, he spun around, and looked at me.
"Victory, what are you doing here?" he asked nervously.
I giggled.
"You guys kissed, twice!" I said.
He blushed.
"Well, that's what happens when people are real close." he replied.
I smiled.
"Dad, you like her." I pointed out.
He sighed.
"you have no clue!" he said dreamily.
I laughed.
"Dad, stop sounding like a teenage girl!" I pleaded.
"Oh, that's what I'm doing? I thought I was doing you!" he admitted smirking,
"Dad!" I cried shoving him.
He laughed.
I Hugged him.
I knew one thing for sure, I was happy to see him in love again.
I cant believe this!!! it's all thanks to you guys!!
Thanks so much!!!!)
My dad must have really liked this girl, she was all he brought up all the time.
She was also, the main person he hung out with.
I liked seeing him this way, it was like once again mom was here.
"Jordyn?" I started when we were in her car on the way to piano lessons.
"yes?"
"Do you think Dad will ever marry Carmen?" I asked her.
She was silent for a few moments.
When I thought she wasnt going to answer, she said:"I'm not sure. I guess will see."
I was happy when piano lessons was canceled, and Jasmine couldnt meet me at the ice cream shop.
Cause I just wanted to stay home, and think.
Of course, that was interrupted when the front door slammed, and two voices started talking.
I walked over to the banister, but ducked quickly when I saw my dad, and Carmen down there.
"This is a nice place." Carmen said admiring it.
"Thanks, my wife, before she died, picked it out." he explained.
Oh my gosh, I'd get to see them on a date!
"Oh, here. Let me take your jacket." he said helping her take it off.
She laughed.
"your being such a gentle man."
He smiled.
"I was raised that way."
They stared for a long time, I thought they were going to kiss, but my dad blushed, and looked away.
"Um, I made dinner. Lasagna." he said walking away.
She seemed upset, like she wanted him to kiss her.
"Oh, ok." she replied following him.
I groaned, they were being silly.
"Italians my favorite." she told him.
"It was Lauren's too."
Something told her that he was upset.
"are you ok?" she asked.
He nodded.
"Yeah, I'm fine. why?"
"I dont know, you just seemed discouraged." she explained.
He bit his lower lip.
"I'll prove it, see I'm fine!" he wailed grabbing Carmen, and spinning hima round.
She laughed as the song love bug came on.
His smile faded, and he looked down at the ground.
"I'm not ok." he admitted.
Her smile faded now too.
"Joe, what's wrong?" she asked concerned.
He sighed.
"This dinner, this house, this song, their all Lauren's favorite things!" he cried, falling onto the couch.
Carmen pursed her lip, then sat next to him.
"you miss her." she observed.
My dad nodded.
"I miss her very much."
She sighed.
"I can relate, my husband was a soldier in Iraqi, he died fighting for his country." she explained.
My dad's eyes fell.
"I'm sorry."
She laughed.
"Theres no need to be, because I'm proud of him, he died my hero." she told him.
He smiled.
"well, so was my wife.
When I first met her, her parents left her behind.
She had mean kids at school, and other things.
She almost died countless times, in different ways.
Ok, she was my trooper, and my hero." he explained.
Her smile widened.
"and now, maybe we can be each others heroes," she said, leaning closer to him.
He leaned closer as well.
"How much of a hero?" he asked.
She wrapped her arms around him.
"I dont know, you tell me."
She leaned in, and placed her lips on his.
My mouth dropped open.
Finally!
This wasnt like the kiss with Heidi, I know that because he was hugging Carmen, and they kissed longer then she did with him.
When he pulled away, he was breathless, and she was amazed.
"I think I might like you being my hero." he admitted sheepishly.
She giggled, and he laughed.
The rest of the night, they no longer acted with an awkward attitude.
They were laughing, and talking, it's as if they've known each other forever.
"I had fun." he told her when she was going to leave.
She smiled.
"i had fun too."
It was silent.
"Well, I better go." she explained sadly.
He nodded.
She leaned in, and kissed him again.
"Goodnight."
"Night."
After she left, I walked down the stairs, and cleared my throat.
Startled, he spun around, and looked at me.
"Victory, what are you doing here?" he asked nervously.
I giggled.
"You guys kissed, twice!" I said.
He blushed.
"Well, that's what happens when people are real close." he replied.
I smiled.
"Dad, you like her." I pointed out.
He sighed.
"you have no clue!" he said dreamily.
I laughed.
"Dad, stop sounding like a teenage girl!" I pleaded.
"Oh, that's what I'm doing? I thought I was doing you!" he admitted smirking,
"Dad!" I cried shoving him.
He laughed.
I Hugged him.
I knew one thing for sure, I was happy to see him in love again.



30 Comments
WHAO!!!!!!!!!!
OMG SHE'S GONNA BE SO MAD!
AMAZING!
Really i am not surprised this is the best story on here,it was the reason i joined quibblo!
Great Job Lauren!!!!!!!!!
hehe. then you were right. :)
OMGGGG NEXXXT!!!
OMFGOMFG. LAURENS WHAT?!?!?!?!?!!!?!!~?!?!?!?
omg. i cant comprehend that. OMFGOMFGOMFG!!!
next please!!!!!!!!!!!!
awwwwwwwwww! that was so cute!
omg! she was alive?! how could u lie to ur own daughter about her mother!?
OMGGG NEXT PART ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!
OMG! ALL RIGHT VICTORY! next plz asap!
Yep.
yep wat?
WOW!!!!!!! Victory is going to be pissed! How could Joe lie to her!!!! NEXT PART NOW PLZ!!!
:O OMG VICTORY IS ALIVE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! dats awsome but they lied to her :'( nxt prt plz
victory's been alive.. do u mean laurens alive?