My love story...JONAS style
I'm putting all of the chapters here :) So now you guys can read it from the beginning :-)
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© Jordyn N. Taylor
I stood there like an idiot, not knowing what exactly to do. There I stood behind my piano looking blankly at the people in front of me. It wasn't stage freight, and at this moment I didn't really care what it was.
"Well, are you going to play for us or not?" one of the men said. There was absolutely no need to be pushy.
"Um yea." I said my tone a bit irritated. I began to play and sing one of the songs I had composed myself. I shut them out and just thought about the song and me. I let it take me away. Then unfortunately it was over. I waited almost too patiently for them to decide. I looked at the clock, I could think of a bunch of other things I'd rather do than just stand here.
"We're going to sign you." A smile spread across my face, I had just been signed to a record label.
I headed down the long hallway to the exit where I would be free. Then he hit me. All my stuff tumbled to the floor as did I. Damn it. I knelt down to pick it up and so did he. At least he hadn't run off, that would have really ticked me off. I sighed as I looked at the man who ran into me. His eyes were so beautiful. Deep chocolate brown. I always had a thing for guys with brown and hazel eyes. I immediately got lost, I completely forgot where I was and my balance was gone as I stood to retrieve my stuff. I was so stuck on his eyes that I barely realized who it was...Nick Jonas.
"Well, are you going to play for us or not?" one of the men said. There was absolutely no need to be pushy.
"Um yea." I said my tone a bit irritated. I began to play and sing one of the songs I had composed myself. I shut them out and just thought about the song and me. I let it take me away. Then unfortunately it was over. I waited almost too patiently for them to decide. I looked at the clock, I could think of a bunch of other things I'd rather do than just stand here.
"We're going to sign you." A smile spread across my face, I had just been signed to a record label.
I headed down the long hallway to the exit where I would be free. Then he hit me. All my stuff tumbled to the floor as did I. Damn it. I knelt down to pick it up and so did he. At least he hadn't run off, that would have really ticked me off. I sighed as I looked at the man who ran into me. His eyes were so beautiful. Deep chocolate brown. I always had a thing for guys with brown and hazel eyes. I immediately got lost, I completely forgot where I was and my balance was gone as I stood to retrieve my stuff. I was so stuck on his eyes that I barely realized who it was...Nick Jonas.
28 Comments
Cool. So are you going to post the rest soon then? I really love this story.. =D
Yeah, but it's gunna take awhile to get all 100 and some chapters so hold on tight guys. THANKS!
cool! i like it this way it's awsome!
tht is such a good idea!!
I Love this Story and I Can't wait for it Too Be continued!
Uh i like dis but comming from me ( author) you should watch how u organize your info, you said you have a crush on him then you said you dont want to have a crush on him to me it makes no sense no offense
I understand how The Author would probably feel that way.....i love the jonas brothers, but im having difficulty deciding whether to go to their concert or not,i wanna go but cuz i wanna go i dont wanna go cuz i know they'll be there.....its confusing & depressing....i enjoyed the book...cept the fact that maybe she ends up sleeping with nick & mitchell alot of the time....oh & i think shes jealous of miley & i think you portray miley wrong, you shouldnt bag her out..besides that i enjoyed it :)
Excuse me, I'm an author too, and there is a point to the confusion, my character is indecicive, and I portrayed that well. Who are you to judge? Thanks for your critisizm but in my opinion, I think you need to give constructive critisizm and not destructive. When you say no offense, it doesn't make it any less offensive. When I post the rest of the story you will see what I mean by indecisive.
To the second comment, I do apologize for that, I wanted to convey an adult maturaty and you can't just have kids out of nowhere so...yeah. Also, I just wanted to clarify that I AM NOT jealous of Miley. My character, like myself, don't like her very much. Plus, her dislike of Miley plays a larger part in the chapters ahead. All of my chapters correspond together like pieces of a puzzle. My intentions were to create a phsycological thrill to my main character, make her very perplex and confusing.
Dear Confused, thx for clarifying that, :) i understand the fact that maybe u dont like her........i dont want to like her.....unfortunately for me, i feel sorry for her, and my heart sorta reaches out for her (corny i KNOW! but its true...) im the sorta person who always looks for the good in ppl no matter wat they do.....that can be a bad things sometimes, anyway, i love the story and ur doing a gr8 job! :)
Also i hope u dont find my critism too harsh....:)
Absolutely not :-) I just thought'd I'd clarify to one of your concerns.
If you were An Author, You would Learn to right Properly and have correct Grammer and Punctiation. I Know i'm not the Best speller But if Your Making a Big deal about you Being a Author, Express it Properly.
http://www.quibblo.com/quiz/d-RuEIy/Why-Cant-I-get-You-out-Of-My-Head-A-Quiliete-Werewolf-Lovestory
For all You Jacob and Seth Lovers :)
Team Jacob, are you writing to me or Tabbz?
I've read them all before, but yet.. I still love it and want to next one.. :)
This is amazing! Great job!!!
the only bigger fail i have wittnessed was twilight
That's great!!! And to anyone reading this, Please check out my story called 'Kilo.' ... And tell me what you think