Ultimate Secret
This is the first of my many poems. I hope you enjoy them. Please comment, and whether good or bad, I'll take it into consideration.
Thanks for your help,
A fellow author.
Sometimes, she thinks her mask is slipping
And when her parents find out they'll start flipping
Because she thought of ending her life
But she didn't tell them they acted as a knife
Cutting and cutting until her wound was raw
But that was what they never saw
They thought she was just mad
Never that she was incredibly sad
But she must not let them kow
And must keep her crying to a minimum low
This is my ultimate secret to hold
If I don't, my life will crumble and fold
And when her parents find out they'll start flipping
Because she thought of ending her life
But she didn't tell them they acted as a knife
Cutting and cutting until her wound was raw
But that was what they never saw
They thought she was just mad
Never that she was incredibly sad
But she must not let them kow
And must keep her crying to a minimum low
This is my ultimate secret to hold
If I don't, my life will crumble and fold
3 Comments
These are AMAZING!!!!!! Im VERY JEALOUS!!!!!! keep writing!!
okay. i wasn't sure if they were good, but i will. thanks alot!!!
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