Go Away.
Hey, I noticed that quibblo made a new thingy on here called "Story" So i wanted to try it out and make a "Story".
P.s this isnt a happy story more like really sad and kinda happy.
Chapter 1
The Begining and End.
They was arguing again. My Mother and Step-Father. This happens almost every night. It starts with a chat about somehting. Then they start Arguing. Then He hits her. Fianlly he comes to my room to get me. Last night he tried to....R@93 me, Luckly i was able to get away. Thia has been going on for Two years now,Right after his son commited suicide. His son name was James. He had a girlfriend and she was prenate with twins. Her and the babies was Murdered by Serial Killer. James felt like his life couldnt go on. His Death may of eased his pain but It just made it Choas here on earth. I stoped thinking once i heard Foot steps near my door. I went under my bed and pulled out the bucher Knife i had hidden. My door opened.
" You have 24 hours before i have to kick you out" Jack told me (the step-father)
"WHAT!?! where am i suppose to go!?! Im Only 16!" I yelled
"Stay at one of your boyfriends house" He said and closed the door. I pulled out my cell phone. I called one of my best friends, Jace. I told him what happened. I knew he'll let me stay cause he has his own place.
"Bring all you stuff to school in your car tomarrow, I will not have my Bestfriend homeless." He said
"Thank you Jacie, I own you big." I told him
"No problem" he said and we hung up.
I started to pack my things while listening to my Ipod. Much like Falling by Flyleaf came on. I started to tear up but i sucked it up. After another hour of packing i began to get tired. i Put on some Pj's that I didnt Pack and went to sleep.
I woke up to Screaming. It was strange. It was Five A.m. I grabbed my Bucher Knife and ran out my room. I saw jack Hitting my Mother's head with a hammer. It was lots and lots of Blood. I knew he Killed her. He didnt know i was behind Him so i grabbed my keys and ran to my car (Her stuff is already in her car). I called the police in my car. I started to Panic when the Front door opened. He was Covered in blood and he ran torwards my car. I Sped out the drive way. I Drove over Jace house. Went i got there i Banged on his door. While i did that i noticed that i had Blood on me. Jace Fianlly Opened the door.
"God, What Happened to you!" He yelled
I quickly walked into his house.
"Jack Killed my mom, He Tried to get me" I whispered
Jace Eyes widen.
"i Called the police." I told him
He ran to his room to go get some clothes for me.
"you need to change, your not going to school today." he told me
Jace Always loved to baby me,but this time i knew this wasnt about babying me this time. I went to the bathroom to change and went to the living room to see the news
"A 42 Causan Male was arrested at 6 a.m for murder." The reporter said Then they showed a picture of jack. The reporter went on "The Male Jack Henderson Tried to attack his 16 year old step-daughter but she escaped" She said and then jace turned the T.V off.
"Sit down." He demanded me softly
I did what i was told
"Do you extra stuff at your house you need?" he asked lookin my eyes.
I burst out crying. I started to talk i could barley understand what i was saying but her knew every word i said.
"its okay, Its okay." he whispered in my hair
"Im hungry, Can we go to chipoletle?" i asked
Jace smiled at me
"Sure, You feel a little better now?" he asked me
"I feel completly better" I told him and it was true.
"Well come on well go smash on some food!" Jace said sounding like me. I laughed. We went outside and was attacked by the press. We was able to get inside the car and ride away. Jace turned on Solo Dolo by kid Cudi. It Explains How i feel except im not alone. I have jace. By time the song was over we was at the resturant. We went and got our food and sat in the car and ate. I was done eating so i began to sing Solo Dolo. I did that when i was bored. I close my eyes. I geuss i fell asleep cause when i woke up i was in the bed with Jace. He was sleep but he had his ipod playin his ears. It was a habbit that me and him started when we first a cd players, Now it continunded. I stared at him. Jace was really really cute but he had a girlfriend. They been together for like 3 years now. I wonder why they wasnt living together. Jace began to wake up and although i noticed this i was still staring at him.
"Hello Stranger." He said making me laugh and then his phone rang. It was Jennifer,His girlfriend. She never liked me for some reason.
"Yea you can come over. Bye." He said
"The wicked Witch of the west is comming over?" i asked
He laughed "Yes she is."
"Okay....But If Ya'll two do anything nasty...." i said lingering off.
"We wont, We wont." He said reassuring me
"Good." I told him
" You have 24 hours before i have to kick you out" Jack told me (the step-father)
"WHAT!?! where am i suppose to go!?! Im Only 16!" I yelled
"Stay at one of your boyfriends house" He said and closed the door. I pulled out my cell phone. I called one of my best friends, Jace. I told him what happened. I knew he'll let me stay cause he has his own place.
"Bring all you stuff to school in your car tomarrow, I will not have my Bestfriend homeless." He said
"Thank you Jacie, I own you big." I told him
"No problem" he said and we hung up.
I started to pack my things while listening to my Ipod. Much like Falling by Flyleaf came on. I started to tear up but i sucked it up. After another hour of packing i began to get tired. i Put on some Pj's that I didnt Pack and went to sleep.
I woke up to Screaming. It was strange. It was Five A.m. I grabbed my Bucher Knife and ran out my room. I saw jack Hitting my Mother's head with a hammer. It was lots and lots of Blood. I knew he Killed her. He didnt know i was behind Him so i grabbed my keys and ran to my car (Her stuff is already in her car). I called the police in my car. I started to Panic when the Front door opened. He was Covered in blood and he ran torwards my car. I Sped out the drive way. I Drove over Jace house. Went i got there i Banged on his door. While i did that i noticed that i had Blood on me. Jace Fianlly Opened the door.
"God, What Happened to you!" He yelled
I quickly walked into his house.
"Jack Killed my mom, He Tried to get me" I whispered
Jace Eyes widen.
"i Called the police." I told him
He ran to his room to go get some clothes for me.
"you need to change, your not going to school today." he told me
Jace Always loved to baby me,but this time i knew this wasnt about babying me this time. I went to the bathroom to change and went to the living room to see the news
"A 42 Causan Male was arrested at 6 a.m for murder." The reporter said Then they showed a picture of jack. The reporter went on "The Male Jack Henderson Tried to attack his 16 year old step-daughter but she escaped" She said and then jace turned the T.V off.
"Sit down." He demanded me softly
I did what i was told
"Do you extra stuff at your house you need?" he asked lookin my eyes.
I burst out crying. I started to talk i could barley understand what i was saying but her knew every word i said.
"its okay, Its okay." he whispered in my hair
"Im hungry, Can we go to chipoletle?" i asked
Jace smiled at me
"Sure, You feel a little better now?" he asked me
"I feel completly better" I told him and it was true.
"Well come on well go smash on some food!" Jace said sounding like me. I laughed. We went outside and was attacked by the press. We was able to get inside the car and ride away. Jace turned on Solo Dolo by kid Cudi. It Explains How i feel except im not alone. I have jace. By time the song was over we was at the resturant. We went and got our food and sat in the car and ate. I was done eating so i began to sing Solo Dolo. I did that when i was bored. I close my eyes. I geuss i fell asleep cause when i woke up i was in the bed with Jace. He was sleep but he had his ipod playin his ears. It was a habbit that me and him started when we first a cd players, Now it continunded. I stared at him. Jace was really really cute but he had a girlfriend. They been together for like 3 years now. I wonder why they wasnt living together. Jace began to wake up and although i noticed this i was still staring at him.
"Hello Stranger." He said making me laugh and then his phone rang. It was Jennifer,His girlfriend. She never liked me for some reason.
"Yea you can come over. Bye." He said
"The wicked Witch of the west is comming over?" i asked
He laughed "Yes she is."
"Okay....But If Ya'll two do anything nasty...." i said lingering off.
"We wont, We wont." He said reassuring me
"Good." I told him



16 Comments
Okay... but if y'all so anything nasty...
XD. It's good. But you should work on your grammar and spelling(:
awesome story but agreed on what's above.
grammar really needs some work
Lol I havent took spelling lessons Since......5th or 4th grade :( Thats really bad XD But ill try to use an online dictionary
i lyked it, it wus awesome~umnumum lol
Lol Twank ywou!
Awesometastic!!! =) Next plz!!! =P
Awesome, It Had Me Biting My Nails(; (Nervous Habit)
But Grammer Needs A Little Work. I Hope There Will Be
Romance Between Jace And You(; Lol :DD
What!?!?!?!?! That's horrible!!!!! I mean the story is good but that's horrible he killed her with a hammer?!?!?! and his son's girlfriend got killed by a serial killer?!?!
I think your cousin that read it just covered her mouth b/c it's so violent. (I took your other quiz)
But it's still really good. =D Just touch up your Grammer and Spelling a little. Other than that your good to go! =]
i most read the nxt chapter i really didnt notice the grammer tho
PLZ MAKE THE NEXT ONE
I luv this =D
Great job!
Next Please! DD: