TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK OF MY POEM !!!!! PLEASE....

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Okay I write some poems let me now what you think please............?????!!!!!!!

Chapter 1

things....idk

by: missclh96
First one:

The slight whistle in the fast breeze,the air between the trees,the way you know things others have never dreamed,singing, dancing, and messing around, whatever else in this small town.

Just know i'm there. I know where I am and you know where you are. Whether we're near or far we'll sing a duet in peace with the birds that fly from the
trees.

The birds don't know who we are but we know and that's what seems to matter in this slow moving world.The ones we love and care for maybe even adore are here and they may bring us cheer, So keep in mind things that happen in a minute or a flash are meant to be so just think.

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