book one: The beginning of the clans
one aprentice shell betray its clan,but in battle a new aprentis will take his place in the clan,that culd be the bravest of them all(prophecy)
Chapter 1
the first battlel
Allegiances
Lightningclan: Leader: lightningstar-bright gold-tabby tom, tinged silver around her muzzle
Deputy: Flamehaert- flame-colored pelt
Medicine cat: sparkleaf-Beautiful dark tortoiseshell she-cat with a distinctive dappled coat
Warriors: blackheart- Magnificent black tabby tom with thick fur like a lion’s mane
Apprentice wevelpaw
snowstorm-big white tom
lightstripe-sleek black and gray tom
leaftail-pale tabby tom with dark black stripes
pingefur-small dusky brown she-cat
Apprentice bernpaw bramblefire-magnifisent flame colored pelt tinged brown at the tip of his tail
Queens: sandstreem-pale ginger she-cat
nightfur-beautiful white coat and blue eyes Elders: sticktail-big dark brown tabby tom with a tail that is strait as a stick
Treeclan
Leader: treestar-a black-and-white tom with a very long tail
Streemclan: Leader: streemstar-unusually spotted golden tabby she-cat
Deputy: mistyclaw-gray she-cat with blue eyes
Snowclan: Leader: snowstar-large white tom with huge jet black paws
Cat outside clans
zanily-muscular Gray and white tom who lives in a barn near crookedstreem
link-she-cat with long creamy brown fur who lives with zanily
stink small gray and white she-cat who lives with zanily and link
Dedicated to Vannessa, Gavin, and Chantel.
The beginning
chapter one
“Lightningstar Redfur is dyeing” wevelpaw cried out. Lightningstar and wevelpaw padded out of the leaders den. “Treestar, I smell his scent.” lightningstar hissed. “We will launch an attack at Moonlight, after I choose a new deputy”. Before the battle lightningclan patrol stopped to hunt. After they had eaten, they padded strait passed the treeclan border and charged through the ravine. Battle screeches of terror Flamehaert the deputy of lightningclan charged and bit treestar’s neck and then he fainted and started to lose his life and unfortunately he lost five lives and now has one life.
And finely lightningstar with only one life jumped and killed treestar. But risked her last life and was killed by snaphaert the deputy of treeclan. But snaphaert was unaware that Flamehaert was charging at him. So Flamehaert jumped and landed right on top of him. And struck snaphaert in the eye making snaphaert blind in that eye.
The lightningclan patrol left wounded and bleeding two warriors dead and being dragged back two camp. Back in lightningclan territory the patrol went back to the lightningclan camp it was dawn when they got there Flamehaert jumped up onto Highrock called a clan meeting. Summoning the cats out of their dens. Cats fully woken up by seeing their leader lying unmoving in front of the Highrock “last night and today we will have a tragedy to face and a threat from treeclan. Lightningstar died last night, in the battle with treeclan.
I will go to the moonstone and get my nine lives and my leader name and tomorrow at dawn I will appoint a new deputy. Meeting dismissed.”
Flamestar hops up onto the Highrock and calls out a clan meeting. I have made my choice; my new deputy will be Bramblefire
A clan called boneclan attacks the weakened clans and kills streemclan’s leader and, treeclan’s new leader. Bonestar attempts to kill snowclan’s leader flamestar pounces just at the nick of time to kill bonestar to save the forest, but not for long he quickly doges a boneclan warrior and kill the deputy.
Snowclan and Lightningclan team up and fight to the death against treeclan and streemclan. The battle turned out to be a war but even though so many died Lightningclan and snowclan poled through and destroyed part of boneclan but the rest retreated. Later at dawn. Another war broke out with treeclan and boneclan and lasted two days and treeclan gets captured by boneclan. “Flamestar at noon you said you would call a clan meeting?” bramblefire mewed.” plus I’ve been scenting Twolags in the forest.” “Twolags! You will be in a patrol to drive out the Twolags. But before you do, I smell a badger in the camp!”Flamestar hissed. Thirty minutes later BANG BOOM BANG.... “B….b….boomsticks! Twolags are attacking the camp we have to find a new place to live in….” BANG... “No! Sparkleaf! Sparkleaf has been shot.” wevelpaw cried out.
“Retreat it’s the only way of survival” sandstreem and Flamestar hissed at the same time. “Help!” Somebody mewed from the distends, Flamestar herd the cry for help and charged towards twolegplace when he got there he saw stray cats attacking his sister princess he charged and started a seven vs. one fight. “I am a leader from one out of four clans I can take on all seven of you”. Flamestar hissed “Yah right “. A stray hissed. Scratch, bight hiss scratch bight kill bight kill hiss. “Retreat!” but the leader of the strays stayed to fight.
“I’m going to kill you and take a souvenir a claw” the stray hissed. “Ok try me.” Flamestar hissed. The stray pounced camped on to flamestar and swiped his claws at flamestar’s eyes blinding flamestar and then finished him off with a severe bight on the neck to kill him. Bramblefire stared in horror and pounced on the stray, the stray shocked by the surprise attack. Bramblefire took the chance and with a swifed bight on the neck the stray fell to the ground dead. Wevelpaw betays lightningclan after the battle.
seven moons have past sence wevelpaws petral. but has a thret coming strait at him at the gathering....at the gathering i fight brakes out because of the new arivel to lightningclan claws slashing bites biteing necks.at the gathering i fight brakes out because of the new arivel to lightningclan claws slashing bites biteing necks then oll of asodon a huge cloud apied over the silverpelt a moment later lightning struck cloud-to-coud revialing a silver ansister that hissed a clear message,"LIVE OR DIE!" With that he vanished leaving the other cats alone to thing on what just happend. They desided they will only fight when nesesary and create borders,create a warrior code., biuld a camp that is in the middle of there tarrettories. Live both peacefull and battle only to compeat for pray and for tarrettory. that then and there the clans have been created.one moon has passed,the forest is still,the wind has stoped.Silaence, the new arivel,tanglepaw set out on his first quest as an apprentice,he made it half way through treeclan tarretory when he was tackled by a treeclan aprenttice. tanglepaw was pind down. Luckly he new a sneak attack. he went limp at that moment the fear passed from tanglepaw to his attacker as tanglepaw shot forword at full speed climed up a tree with his attacker still on his back. At the top branch he flug his attacker from his back,and smack his aponent was on the ground dead. He kept on going,a moon has passed since the battle with the treeclan cat. once a wile he would stop to hunt. then bang,out of nowere a cat ran strait at him and pounced on tanglepaw claws slashing hissing and bighting tanglepaw did somthing stupid he rolled over smashing his attacker to the ground. his attacker made a fading hiss and died.
Lightningclan: Leader: lightningstar-bright gold-tabby tom, tinged silver around her muzzle
Deputy: Flamehaert- flame-colored pelt
Medicine cat: sparkleaf-Beautiful dark tortoiseshell she-cat with a distinctive dappled coat
Warriors: blackheart- Magnificent black tabby tom with thick fur like a lion’s mane
Apprentice wevelpaw
snowstorm-big white tom
lightstripe-sleek black and gray tom
leaftail-pale tabby tom with dark black stripes
pingefur-small dusky brown she-cat
Apprentice bernpaw bramblefire-magnifisent flame colored pelt tinged brown at the tip of his tail
Queens: sandstreem-pale ginger she-cat
nightfur-beautiful white coat and blue eyes Elders: sticktail-big dark brown tabby tom with a tail that is strait as a stick
Treeclan
Leader: treestar-a black-and-white tom with a very long tail
Streemclan: Leader: streemstar-unusually spotted golden tabby she-cat
Deputy: mistyclaw-gray she-cat with blue eyes
Snowclan: Leader: snowstar-large white tom with huge jet black paws
Cat outside clans
zanily-muscular Gray and white tom who lives in a barn near crookedstreem
link-she-cat with long creamy brown fur who lives with zanily
stink small gray and white she-cat who lives with zanily and link
Dedicated to Vannessa, Gavin, and Chantel.
The beginning
chapter one
“Lightningstar Redfur is dyeing” wevelpaw cried out. Lightningstar and wevelpaw padded out of the leaders den. “Treestar, I smell his scent.” lightningstar hissed. “We will launch an attack at Moonlight, after I choose a new deputy”. Before the battle lightningclan patrol stopped to hunt. After they had eaten, they padded strait passed the treeclan border and charged through the ravine. Battle screeches of terror Flamehaert the deputy of lightningclan charged and bit treestar’s neck and then he fainted and started to lose his life and unfortunately he lost five lives and now has one life.
And finely lightningstar with only one life jumped and killed treestar. But risked her last life and was killed by snaphaert the deputy of treeclan. But snaphaert was unaware that Flamehaert was charging at him. So Flamehaert jumped and landed right on top of him. And struck snaphaert in the eye making snaphaert blind in that eye.
The lightningclan patrol left wounded and bleeding two warriors dead and being dragged back two camp. Back in lightningclan territory the patrol went back to the lightningclan camp it was dawn when they got there Flamehaert jumped up onto Highrock called a clan meeting. Summoning the cats out of their dens. Cats fully woken up by seeing their leader lying unmoving in front of the Highrock “last night and today we will have a tragedy to face and a threat from treeclan. Lightningstar died last night, in the battle with treeclan.
I will go to the moonstone and get my nine lives and my leader name and tomorrow at dawn I will appoint a new deputy. Meeting dismissed.”
Flamestar hops up onto the Highrock and calls out a clan meeting. I have made my choice; my new deputy will be Bramblefire
A clan called boneclan attacks the weakened clans and kills streemclan’s leader and, treeclan’s new leader. Bonestar attempts to kill snowclan’s leader flamestar pounces just at the nick of time to kill bonestar to save the forest, but not for long he quickly doges a boneclan warrior and kill the deputy.
Snowclan and Lightningclan team up and fight to the death against treeclan and streemclan. The battle turned out to be a war but even though so many died Lightningclan and snowclan poled through and destroyed part of boneclan but the rest retreated. Later at dawn. Another war broke out with treeclan and boneclan and lasted two days and treeclan gets captured by boneclan. “Flamestar at noon you said you would call a clan meeting?” bramblefire mewed.” plus I’ve been scenting Twolags in the forest.” “Twolags! You will be in a patrol to drive out the Twolags. But before you do, I smell a badger in the camp!”Flamestar hissed. Thirty minutes later BANG BOOM BANG.... “B….b….boomsticks! Twolags are attacking the camp we have to find a new place to live in….” BANG... “No! Sparkleaf! Sparkleaf has been shot.” wevelpaw cried out.
“Retreat it’s the only way of survival” sandstreem and Flamestar hissed at the same time. “Help!” Somebody mewed from the distends, Flamestar herd the cry for help and charged towards twolegplace when he got there he saw stray cats attacking his sister princess he charged and started a seven vs. one fight. “I am a leader from one out of four clans I can take on all seven of you”. Flamestar hissed “Yah right “. A stray hissed. Scratch, bight hiss scratch bight kill bight kill hiss. “Retreat!” but the leader of the strays stayed to fight.
“I’m going to kill you and take a souvenir a claw” the stray hissed. “Ok try me.” Flamestar hissed. The stray pounced camped on to flamestar and swiped his claws at flamestar’s eyes blinding flamestar and then finished him off with a severe bight on the neck to kill him. Bramblefire stared in horror and pounced on the stray, the stray shocked by the surprise attack. Bramblefire took the chance and with a swifed bight on the neck the stray fell to the ground dead. Wevelpaw betays lightningclan after the battle.
seven moons have past sence wevelpaws petral. but has a thret coming strait at him at the gathering....at the gathering i fight brakes out because of the new arivel to lightningclan claws slashing bites biteing necks.at the gathering i fight brakes out because of the new arivel to lightningclan claws slashing bites biteing necks then oll of asodon a huge cloud apied over the silverpelt a moment later lightning struck cloud-to-coud revialing a silver ansister that hissed a clear message,"LIVE OR DIE!" With that he vanished leaving the other cats alone to thing on what just happend. They desided they will only fight when nesesary and create borders,create a warrior code., biuld a camp that is in the middle of there tarrettories. Live both peacefull and battle only to compeat for pray and for tarrettory. that then and there the clans have been created.one moon has passed,the forest is still,the wind has stoped.Silaence, the new arivel,tanglepaw set out on his first quest as an apprentice,he made it half way through treeclan tarretory when he was tackled by a treeclan aprenttice. tanglepaw was pind down. Luckly he new a sneak attack. he went limp at that moment the fear passed from tanglepaw to his attacker as tanglepaw shot forword at full speed climed up a tree with his attacker still on his back. At the top branch he flug his attacker from his back,and smack his aponent was on the ground dead. He kept on going,a moon has passed since the battle with the treeclan cat. once a wile he would stop to hunt. then bang,out of nowere a cat ran strait at him and pounced on tanglepaw claws slashing hissing and bighting tanglepaw did somthing stupid he rolled over smashing his attacker to the ground. his attacker made a fading hiss and died.



8 Comments
Very good it has potential :) I like
still working on it.
can u recamend this story to others
THANKS
Great job! It is coming along nicely. Keep it up!
i will keep on working on it tell it is at the end and that is going to be chapter 50
thanx
Great story