A NeW Life.
Lol! me again... just bored, so yah.. here u goooo!
Chapter 1
Sleepy.
It was 3:00 AM in the morning. I was far from going to sleep. My mother passed away a few months ago and my father wanted to move away from the home that brought so many memories of her with it.
We left last night at 7:00 PM. I spent the whole day with my friends. They were the only link to the world... and now, they were gone. The car bounced on a huge pebble. I jumped up along with the car. "You alright sweetheart?" My father asked. His face was illuminated with the moonlight. His sharp features highlighted. He had a brown goatee and pale blue eyes that looked into nothingness. He was different with my mom. He had cheerful blue eyes. I sometimes feel that he lived only for my sake. My mother's laughing face crept into my mind. Tears stung my eyes. I wiped them off.
Any way. I am Alex. 16. Brunette, slim... and wear only jeans. The skinny kind.
I looked up at my dad and said, "Dad... I love you." He smiled and said, "Me too sweetie."
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The next morning.
I pulled the blanket away from my face. sunlight hit my face. I groaned. My eyes were red from all the crying. "We are here" My father said as we pulled up near a huge cream colored house. It was huge and elegant. There were many houses around the area. I smiled at him. He smiled back and hugged me.
I looked at the house again. We both moved the luggage in. I went upstairs. My room was purple in color. It had stars painted on it. I was an artist myself. I liked my room. I put up all the green day posters on it.
It was my favorite band.
I loved it. There was a huge bed made of linen. So yeah... we're kinda rich.
I looked out the huge rectangular windows. A house was visible on the other side. A small boy of about 8 ran around the porch laughing. His mother ran behind him. I looked away.
We left last night at 7:00 PM. I spent the whole day with my friends. They were the only link to the world... and now, they were gone. The car bounced on a huge pebble. I jumped up along with the car. "You alright sweetheart?" My father asked. His face was illuminated with the moonlight. His sharp features highlighted. He had a brown goatee and pale blue eyes that looked into nothingness. He was different with my mom. He had cheerful blue eyes. I sometimes feel that he lived only for my sake. My mother's laughing face crept into my mind. Tears stung my eyes. I wiped them off.
Any way. I am Alex. 16. Brunette, slim... and wear only jeans. The skinny kind.
I looked up at my dad and said, "Dad... I love you." He smiled and said, "Me too sweetie."
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The next morning.
I pulled the blanket away from my face. sunlight hit my face. I groaned. My eyes were red from all the crying. "We are here" My father said as we pulled up near a huge cream colored house. It was huge and elegant. There were many houses around the area. I smiled at him. He smiled back and hugged me.
I looked at the house again. We both moved the luggage in. I went upstairs. My room was purple in color. It had stars painted on it. I was an artist myself. I liked my room. I put up all the green day posters on it.
It was my favorite band.
I loved it. There was a huge bed made of linen. So yeah... we're kinda rich.
I looked out the huge rectangular windows. A house was visible on the other side. A small boy of about 8 ran around the porch laughing. His mother ran behind him. I looked away.



14 Comments
yay nxt 1 i loved it + i luve 21 guns nd can u let me no wen u make da nxt prt plz nd thnk u
Thank you sooo much!!!!!!!!!!!!!! check out ma otha story 2! (My hogwarts life.)
lol i already did its really good 2 i was like yes i found another hp quiz lol i wish i cood write well D:
u never know until u try! ♥
well im wild creative but itll b so random tht tht ur like wow -takes step bck- nd it wnt make sense
:D nah! hey, lets do this, we can make a chain story or a group story! :D how does that sound. Tell me if you have any other friends. Lets also include roos Cullen!
I changed chapter three!
I'm sorry, but you did a horrible job. like, when u were describing the room, you could have said, the room had glistening silver stars with a lavender background. the bed was huge, made of soft linen. I tacked up posters of my favorite band, Green Day. also, for describing the out side of the house, you could say, the house was elegant,with a pale cream and white exterior. It was like many houses on the street, as there were many. I'm running out of characters, so bye.
That comment was really mean and unnecessary. If you can't use proper spelling and grammar, you should not be criticizing other people. Also, you should give constructive criticism instead of just negative comments. The story itself is lovely. I did not finish it, but it seems to be off to a good start.
I ll try 2 make it btr next time!
@PhoenixPheather Thanks for stickin up huh?! :D
nxt plz
More please!
Next!? I found this story captivating and am waiting on more...