Truly Madly Deeply
"Mum, could you please stay, just for a bit longer. Please because like I don't know anyone here." I begged my mother as she got in the car to go home, but then it was a long trip home. So she stayed for a bit longer, for she knew I would go nuts for time she isn't here. As we walked down the stairs with my bage, full of cloths, to where everyone went to get their names signed of the list, to say that they were here.
"Name, sweetie?" A woman asked me. I froze. I didn't know what to do, then I unfroze and told her my name.
"Um, Tiffany." I answered, "From Tullamore."
"Uh yes, you will be sleeping with the girls from Cowra. If that is ok with you?" The woman continued.
"Yeah no thats ok."
As I walked down the stairs to the cabin, I found the person I would miss the most would in fact be my brother. I loved him and nobody could take that from me. He was my little brother, my cute and funny brother.
"Name, sweetie?" A woman asked me. I froze. I didn't know what to do, then I unfroze and told her my name.
"Um, Tiffany." I answered, "From Tullamore."
"Uh yes, you will be sleeping with the girls from Cowra. If that is ok with you?" The woman continued.
"Yeah no thats ok."
As I walked down the stairs to the cabin, I found the person I would miss the most would in fact be my brother. I loved him and nobody could take that from me. He was my little brother, my cute and funny brother.
42 Comments
Its pretty good... but maybe i can revise it. I don't mean to offend you but i go nuts when I think of ways to advise it and i can't
oh ok. yea, this is how my fiance and i met, we dicided that i would write it out, cuz u see he cant remember a thing. but hey thats guys for u.
yea, if u want.
Really! O that is sooooooooooooo romantic! OMG!
thanks. yea, his idea that i right it. cuz he said im good at writing and he thinks it'd be better if i wrote it. god i love him.
OMG, i always dream about meeting the perfect guy and my happily ever after but i've never actually heard of one! I hope u guys r 2gether forever!!!!!!!!
thanx. i hope we are 2.
awesome
nxt plz
thats is sooo sweet
now its matts turn, we have to wait for him now. cuz like we are doing it from both perspectives and thats where it is to end on mine. now its his turn to write.
awesome nexties so sweet and romantic
have to wait for matt to do it. we are writing the story in both perspectives, so thats where i was to end my part. now its his turn to write.
okay i'll wait
yea, he just has to remember as well, plus he is starting from when he was at school. so it will take a little bit.
morrr plzzzz n tell ur fiance gud luck at remeberin
i hav troubles remeberin wat i did yesterday lol
im sorry thats just matt. ppl just have to wait.
its ok like i said i forget stuff tooo
so i dun mind waitin
yea. well he is off line so ppl just have to wait. plus this was like may. so yea. i can remember it cuz like i dream abut it all the time. so yea. not fun.
hey Tiffany!
i love this!
youre a good writer!
hahaha. i didnt write it all, matt did as well.
yea chapter 4 and 5 was in my point of view
nar. r u finished. can i go back to my point?
yea you can i'm done for now