All Alone Until You Came
ok this is a new series im starting im going to need help but other than that it should go well!!!! This is total fiction. just to let u know.
name:BreAnna(sorry i love the name breanna its pretty)
age:17
hair: blonde, long, wavy
eyes:also brown
height:5'9''
Chapter 1
Intro. to story
You know what is worse than not having a dad with you everyday? A mom not with you on the days your dad is gone. I live in Tulsa, Oklahoma. My Dad lives in Atlanta, Georgia and my mom is always working so i almost never see either of my parents. It has been that way since i was five years old, when my parents got a divorce.I lie awake in my bed. mom is at work on her night shift, so im all alone at my house with nothing to do.my step-dad doesnt do much either he is never at home for god knows wat reasons. dad was to sopposed to have called me but he didnt...again.
i got up to go eat something for dinner. mom said she had left some pizza in the fridge for me. i got a plate of pizza and ate it infront of the t.v. 'The Notebook' was on and it was just starting. u loved this movie it was so sweet and touching. and u ended up falling asleep on the couch. dream i was walking on the street at night with nothing but the street lamps to light the way. it was eerie and odd that i ended up here. all of a sudden i heard a rustle in the bushes nearby. my foot steps quickened but something grabbed me by the waist and turned me around. it was a persone i looked up at their face. the person was a man, a very attractive man. he had a sinister smile on his face. he let u go and with caution u lifted ur hand to touch his face but he was gone. it was as if he was mearly a ghost. u were turning around and getting ready to go back to walking-end dream i woke up with a blanket on top of me. wierd i dont remember getting a blanket and it was still to early for my mom to be back. it was 6:30 so i decided i would go ahead and get ready for school. i grabbed a towel and got into the shower. letting the hot water rush down my back i thought about what i would do today at school. after i was done with my shower, i went to my closet to pick out something to wear. I grabbed a My Chemical Romance t-shirt and some black parachute pants. it was finally time to leave for school as i finished up on putting my makeup on. i grabbed my bag and hopped into my truck. i turned up the music and listened to Evenesence all the way to school. as i tried to find a parking spot i drove past a guy i havent noticed at school before and as i passed him he looked straight at me through the tinted windows of my truck. it was the guy from my dream!!!! i swerved realizing this, almost wrecking my car in the process. the wass all starting to become way too much. i righted myself and parked the truck and practically ran into the school. i went straight to class without looking back. i got to english and there he was sitting down in a desk next to mine. just like before, he was looking directly at me, almost as if he knew i was going to be here. i walked over to my desk trying to act non-chalant. "hello, BreAnna"he said in a dreamy voice. "uhh...how do you know my name"i asked freaked out now. "umm.. i heard someone say it pointing over to my friend Sam. "oh."i said quietly. "so wat class do u have next" "um..Math...u?" "same here. oh! by the way my name is Damion" he said not at all shy. "cool" i said a bit short for words. class was then called to order. wat was a guy like this doing talking to me? he was drop dead gorgeous. all the girls were basically drooling over him. why talk to me im just a gothic chick that has family issues and a questionable attitude towards popular girls.
gosh i dont like pop. girls. they act like they are all that and then some and they always get the cute guys, but wait this one was paying attention to me and not even blinking in the direction of them. wat was next an ice age because it wasnt everyday that someone talked to me. i was an outsider, someone that was viewed as different from everyone else. the only one who ever understood was my bestie sam, she has always been there for me. no matter what. end of story. i looked over at her and smiled and as if she could feel me looking at her she glanced at me and smiled back. she knew everything that i have gone through. i looked back at the teacher right as Mr. Rutherd called on me. "Breanna" good thing i had been semi paying attention we were discussing poetry. "sir" "would u answer the question" he said plainly. "would u repeat the question please i didnt hear u correctly" u said with a hint of a smile playing at the edge of ur lips. "recite a poem of ur choice and then tell me who wrote it." "yes sir."
"Fire And Ice
some say the world will end in fire
some say in ice
from what i've tasted of desire
i hold with those who favor fire
but if it had to perish twice i think i know enough of hate
to say that for destruction ice is also great
and would suffice
by Robert Frost" u recited with pride. "very good Miss. Lithe...next time pay attention to the lecture instead of communicating with Samantha." me and sam giggled quietly to ourselves. "nice cover" Damion said "thanks. i try."i said still giggling. i finally stopped laughing and listened to Mr.Rutherd. Before i knew it the bell rang and we were free to go to our next class.
i got up to go eat something for dinner. mom said she had left some pizza in the fridge for me. i got a plate of pizza and ate it infront of the t.v. 'The Notebook' was on and it was just starting. u loved this movie it was so sweet and touching. and u ended up falling asleep on the couch. dream i was walking on the street at night with nothing but the street lamps to light the way. it was eerie and odd that i ended up here. all of a sudden i heard a rustle in the bushes nearby. my foot steps quickened but something grabbed me by the waist and turned me around. it was a persone i looked up at their face. the person was a man, a very attractive man. he had a sinister smile on his face. he let u go and with caution u lifted ur hand to touch his face but he was gone. it was as if he was mearly a ghost. u were turning around and getting ready to go back to walking-end dream i woke up with a blanket on top of me. wierd i dont remember getting a blanket and it was still to early for my mom to be back. it was 6:30 so i decided i would go ahead and get ready for school. i grabbed a towel and got into the shower. letting the hot water rush down my back i thought about what i would do today at school. after i was done with my shower, i went to my closet to pick out something to wear. I grabbed a My Chemical Romance t-shirt and some black parachute pants. it was finally time to leave for school as i finished up on putting my makeup on. i grabbed my bag and hopped into my truck. i turned up the music and listened to Evenesence all the way to school. as i tried to find a parking spot i drove past a guy i havent noticed at school before and as i passed him he looked straight at me through the tinted windows of my truck. it was the guy from my dream!!!! i swerved realizing this, almost wrecking my car in the process. the wass all starting to become way too much. i righted myself and parked the truck and practically ran into the school. i went straight to class without looking back. i got to english and there he was sitting down in a desk next to mine. just like before, he was looking directly at me, almost as if he knew i was going to be here. i walked over to my desk trying to act non-chalant. "hello, BreAnna"he said in a dreamy voice. "uhh...how do you know my name"i asked freaked out now. "umm.. i heard someone say it pointing over to my friend Sam. "oh."i said quietly. "so wat class do u have next" "um..Math...u?" "same here. oh! by the way my name is Damion" he said not at all shy. "cool" i said a bit short for words. class was then called to order. wat was a guy like this doing talking to me? he was drop dead gorgeous. all the girls were basically drooling over him. why talk to me im just a gothic chick that has family issues and a questionable attitude towards popular girls.
gosh i dont like pop. girls. they act like they are all that and then some and they always get the cute guys, but wait this one was paying attention to me and not even blinking in the direction of them. wat was next an ice age because it wasnt everyday that someone talked to me. i was an outsider, someone that was viewed as different from everyone else. the only one who ever understood was my bestie sam, she has always been there for me. no matter what. end of story. i looked over at her and smiled and as if she could feel me looking at her she glanced at me and smiled back. she knew everything that i have gone through. i looked back at the teacher right as Mr. Rutherd called on me. "Breanna" good thing i had been semi paying attention we were discussing poetry. "sir" "would u answer the question" he said plainly. "would u repeat the question please i didnt hear u correctly" u said with a hint of a smile playing at the edge of ur lips. "recite a poem of ur choice and then tell me who wrote it." "yes sir."
"Fire And Ice
some say the world will end in fire
some say in ice
from what i've tasted of desire
i hold with those who favor fire
but if it had to perish twice i think i know enough of hate
to say that for destruction ice is also great
and would suffice
by Robert Frost" u recited with pride. "very good Miss. Lithe...next time pay attention to the lecture instead of communicating with Samantha." me and sam giggled quietly to ourselves. "nice cover" Damion said "thanks. i try."i said still giggling. i finally stopped laughing and listened to Mr.Rutherd. Before i knew it the bell rang and we were free to go to our next class.



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if u want another part comment. PLEASE!!!
commenting commenting i want another part i'm being fascinated here!!!!! And curious! About what happens next!
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aw they're so cute! what's up with Damion and Michael i'm wondering!
lol u see
i'm still wondering!!!!
LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
double date next!! :)
Next plzzz awesome story
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Next!! :)