Summer Vaction part 1
Um...
This is my first story...
and I like criticism...
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if you have time (:
Chapter 1
I love High School Parties (:
"10 minutes," my best friend Ceicel notified me that the only thing standing in between us and those EXIT doors were the last ten minutes of our freshman lives. "Mmm," was all i mumbled to him in response, because I was deep inside the latest novel I was reading, that I had hidden behind my math text book. "You know what that means" he reminded me, that snapped me out of my trance. "Ohmigod, don't even start with what your about to start", I grimace at the thought. Every year my ex-childhood friend, Brad, throws a huge end-of-the-year party, and invites everyone but me, every year. As i hung my head, think about past memories I'd rather forget, Ceicel interrupts me. "Speak of the devil" i look up to see Brad walking towards us, "and he shall appear" I finished dreadfully, when he got closer, I addressed him. "What do you what, Brad" I asked rudely acting insulted that he's even talking to me. "Well, I just wanted to let you know personally that... your still not invited to my party" he reassured me. "Well," I mimicked his stuck up voice, "I just happen to be doing something a little more important tonight". 'Oh no, he's going want to no what', I thought just after i said it, "Really," he asked, I nodded. 'Stupid, Think,Think' I thought to myself. "And what's that" he asked,like I thought, and before I could stop myself, push my text book off my desk hopped up on top of it and,shouted "Party at my place, I have a pool, and there's no parental supervision!" at leased 200 kids looked up at me, they all stared whispering in their little clicks. I carefully lowered myself off my desk, and looked up at Brad, who's mouth was wide open. "And..."I started, "...your not invited."



3 Comments
nice story keep going =)
mmkay
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