How did i get here?
This story is about a 16 yr old girl get turn into a vampire against her will and try to deny the spark between her and Ash. After useless fight between Raven and her Turner Marcus, she surrenderer to the darkness and find the true meaning of life,love, and pain.
The sun is shining thought my purple drape,i never thought that this was the last time i will ever see the sun.
"ring ring ring" my cell ring, i can only guess who is calling and brace myself for the scream.
"Raven! Raven! Are you still sleeping in your bed?!?
Melissa, the only crazy best friend of my can make my ear ring.
"Yes im in my bed,leave me alone."
"Oh no, Get your butt out of you stupid bed! We are gonna be late for Ashley"s party, you do want to see Kevin. rite?"
Omg it is 10 in the moring and the party is at 7 clock at night,Hello?
The girl must be either really bad at math or she want to go shopping for new outfit. i'm thinking she is really bad at math.
raven tiredly put her cell back to her ear and told mel what she was rambling in her mind
"ok either you are really bad at math or you want to go shopping for new outfit, am i rite?
" oh no way you are not gonna talk to me in that tone of your,last night i had to put my huge ugly pride in my pocket to ask my fugly mom to give me another $100 for today.
unbelievable, Melissa maybe be crazy but she no bum,she is so rich like me and do not have to get money from her mom. she practicably has money growing out of her freshly mowed backyard.
"How much do you have?"
"10,000. Hello, i have money and no im not gonna pay for you because like me you have cash growing out of your butt. im not gonna repeat this.im on the way to your crib and like i said, Get your butt of you stupid bed!"
"sigh" raven closed her red shiny little thing she called cell phone and went to her closet to take her shopping outfit.What should i pick,i have like 10 shopping outfit to choose from."hmm i could were my pink loose dress with white cardigan. no because to Mel it will have mean i don't want to party. yeah"
i went looking thought again and decide to wear that one outfit that i will never ever were but i should, i mean i am tired of looking too pure and sweet. i walk over to my gold frame mirror and look at the girl.She is pretty,i supposed. but at the same time she look sort of wild in a way with her hazel eye shining brightly and golden blonde hair tumbling down her back. Raven looks back at herself and always sell herself short. she was not just a pretty girl for all those award she won at every beauty pageants her dear mother enter . she also is the smartest,kindest and goodhearted. Raven plop on her bed once again argue with herself about what she should wear today.the outfit is her taste indeed but not sure she will look good in it."grr ok fine i will put that on and get out of the house and have a dang good time! oops excuse me, don't mean to curse." she stood up and when into her oversize bathroom and changed.feeling very awkward, slowly she approach the mirror with a doubtful mind. her eye closed and hand on her sides,raven open her eye and her breath caught in her throat."im i look good!"she grasp, in a short leopard dress with black bow right below her chest.To balance her colorful dress she wore her red pump heel and,walk out the door with bow ties purse.
"ring ring ring" my cell ring, i can only guess who is calling and brace myself for the scream.
"Raven! Raven! Are you still sleeping in your bed?!?
Melissa, the only crazy best friend of my can make my ear ring.
"Yes im in my bed,leave me alone."
"Oh no, Get your butt out of you stupid bed! We are gonna be late for Ashley"s party, you do want to see Kevin. rite?"
Omg it is 10 in the moring and the party is at 7 clock at night,Hello?
The girl must be either really bad at math or she want to go shopping for new outfit. i'm thinking she is really bad at math.
raven tiredly put her cell back to her ear and told mel what she was rambling in her mind
"ok either you are really bad at math or you want to go shopping for new outfit, am i rite?
" oh no way you are not gonna talk to me in that tone of your,last night i had to put my huge ugly pride in my pocket to ask my fugly mom to give me another $100 for today.
unbelievable, Melissa maybe be crazy but she no bum,she is so rich like me and do not have to get money from her mom. she practicably has money growing out of her freshly mowed backyard.
"How much do you have?"
"10,000. Hello, i have money and no im not gonna pay for you because like me you have cash growing out of your butt. im not gonna repeat this.im on the way to your crib and like i said, Get your butt of you stupid bed!"
"sigh" raven closed her red shiny little thing she called cell phone and went to her closet to take her shopping outfit.What should i pick,i have like 10 shopping outfit to choose from."hmm i could were my pink loose dress with white cardigan. no because to Mel it will have mean i don't want to party. yeah"
i went looking thought again and decide to wear that one outfit that i will never ever were but i should, i mean i am tired of looking too pure and sweet. i walk over to my gold frame mirror and look at the girl.She is pretty,i supposed. but at the same time she look sort of wild in a way with her hazel eye shining brightly and golden blonde hair tumbling down her back. Raven looks back at herself and always sell herself short. she was not just a pretty girl for all those award she won at every beauty pageants her dear mother enter . she also is the smartest,kindest and goodhearted. Raven plop on her bed once again argue with herself about what she should wear today.the outfit is her taste indeed but not sure she will look good in it."grr ok fine i will put that on and get out of the house and have a dang good time! oops excuse me, don't mean to curse." she stood up and when into her oversize bathroom and changed.feeling very awkward, slowly she approach the mirror with a doubtful mind. her eye closed and hand on her sides,raven open her eye and her breath caught in her throat."im i look good!"she grasp, in a short leopard dress with black bow right below her chest.To balance her colorful dress she wore her red pump heel and,walk out the door with bow ties purse.
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I will try to keep the chapter short later,pls tell me if you like this.peace out!
I will try to keep the chapter short later,pls tell me if you like this.peace out!
it was really good but it had a lot of spelling and grammer errors. dont get me wrong i hate english class and grammer and such, but that was way too many errors even for me... but it was good you should totally continue it!