Flawed (an Embry love story)
Intro: Rana's Dad was a scientist, and he liked to experiment, but one day he got blown up and died. Her mother, driven with grief and a madness that she'd always had, started drinking, became a drunk, and because of her immense usage of drugs she became an angry, abusive mother and went to jail when Rana just couldn't take the beatings anymore and called the police on her mom. So Rana had to go live with her Uncle Billy and cousin Jacob, and Rachel and Rebecca aren't home. Read the rest!
Chapter 1
Pickup (Short)
I woke up to the sound of my alarm clock singing Depeche Mode's, "Enjoy the Silence." I groaned and tunred onto my side to switch it off, and then opened my eyes to aim better when I missed.
"Holy S#it! Is that the time?!" I exclaimed to myself, jumping out of bed. My alarm had gone off four hours later than it was supposed to - it was five past noon!
I scrambled to my senses and got dressed. They would be here in less than half of an hour to pick me up! I rearranged my clothes until they looked perfect, then packed up all the rest of them. I ran to the bathroom and started on the lump of brown disheveled waves and half-curls that was my hair. It looked great in no time - I had been preparing how to do my hair for days. I brushed my teeth and did small amounts of lip gloss and blush - I didn't need anything on my eyes. My eyelashes had always been hideously long anyway, and my eyes were big enough to be a pain to put eyeshadow on. What I hated about myself was that I was completely average, and I HATED, absolutely LOATHED being average. But I had an unusual personality, and that I was grateful for.
I was ready with my suitcases downstairs when He pulled up in his old rabbit.
"Hey Rana," he said lightly as he ducked under the door.
"Hey Jake," I said, smiling. My rescue party had come to take me away.
"Holy S#it! Is that the time?!" I exclaimed to myself, jumping out of bed. My alarm had gone off four hours later than it was supposed to - it was five past noon!
I scrambled to my senses and got dressed. They would be here in less than half of an hour to pick me up! I rearranged my clothes until they looked perfect, then packed up all the rest of them. I ran to the bathroom and started on the lump of brown disheveled waves and half-curls that was my hair. It looked great in no time - I had been preparing how to do my hair for days. I brushed my teeth and did small amounts of lip gloss and blush - I didn't need anything on my eyes. My eyelashes had always been hideously long anyway, and my eyes were big enough to be a pain to put eyeshadow on. What I hated about myself was that I was completely average, and I HATED, absolutely LOATHED being average. But I had an unusual personality, and that I was grateful for.
I was ready with my suitcases downstairs when He pulled up in his old rabbit.
"Hey Rana," he said lightly as he ducked under the door.
"Hey Jake," I said, smiling. My rescue party had come to take me away.



20 Comments
awww sweet jacob
nice first start
ty!
aw:) i like how my character made a little entrance in there lol:) next please!!
im glad you're not mad that i used your character, some people are weird like that. and thanks!
"Oh god" and "Embry, my cousin. Really?!" hilariuos!
thnx!
nxt plz.
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i love this story i love embry i love everything plz keep going i want to know if jake kills embry plzz keep going
i love ur story
please send me some
ok no prob i will now make more and send it to you:D
Please please please make more.. i need more!
i made more. i finished the story. enjoy ... i hope. the last chapter is kinda sad.
what the hell?
excuse me?