the blood
what can be caused? anyway read and comment if you like
Chapter 1
Chapter one
the blood drips down my face
into a dark puddle under my feet.
Caused by the cuts you left on my face,
the knife you pulled up to my face
the one you scrapped down my skin
and the one that ripped me to peices.
Now all i see is my body laying on the ground,
bleeding to death
with scars of whats left..........of that pritty face
you once loved to death...
into a dark puddle under my feet.
Caused by the cuts you left on my face,
the knife you pulled up to my face
the one you scrapped down my skin
and the one that ripped me to peices.
Now all i see is my body laying on the ground,
bleeding to death
with scars of whats left..........of that pritty face
you once loved to death...



8 Comments
lol post those on better sites.....like allpoetry.com or deviantart......cuz its AWESOMEEE
thats heaps good
why thankyou
wow very dark and scary in a sick awsome way...
NICE :3
y thankyou i lik writting like that
i love it keep it up!!! (:
OMFG bub I love it! You're amazing :)
i know i am