Kidnapped (Finished!!!)
This story is about a kidnapping, as you could guess. It has a different ending then you probably would have guess. I know it's long and all, but it hopefully will be worth your time. I have finally finished the story so please enjoy and comment.
To let you know a little more about the story: The main character's name is Erika. She is a little out there for most girls, but she has her reasons. I really hope you like it. Please comment, It's my first finished story. Enjoy! :D
Chapter 1
Life of Erika
My name is Erika Kreg. I hate my life. It is the worst, no matter what my friends say. My parents are soo controlling. They want me to check up with them all the time. I don't have time to do that. Staying home being bored would be ok with them. I have a life unlike them though. So I have an awful step dad who just moved in. My mom is the control freak and wants me to spend family time with her and the person I'm suppose call dad. I told her once, "You're never going to have a real family. You haven't had one since Dad left you!" I was mad at the time and I have never apologized for it. I guess she forgave me though. I get good grades so I can get away faster and also because I get paid when A's come home. It is like 25 bucks for an A and 50 for a 100. I don't get anything for a B though. Kind of sucks that way, I'm living though. My boyfriend can be a jerk, but he is so cute that I can't help myself. Plus he's a really good kisser. So far I'm a virgin. I'm planning on keeping it that way for at least a year more. This year I'm going to 10th grade and I love it. I'm that much closer to leaving the house. I have a job that is going to pay for my car. I work at a Bakery. Cooking is fun but normally I just help out up front. I want to pay for the car by myself and not have my parents buy it. Ya it's going to be a Junker but I will make changes as I go along. I'll have a dozen upgrades and stuff. I want to show my parents that I'm responsible before I take off and leave them. Well at least my mom. My parents are smart and have a lot of money; again I try not to use it. My step dad is a doctor and my mom is a nurse anesthetist, which means she takes care of the anesthesia. That's my life for ya. Oh and my bff is a little whack in the head, but I love her. She keeps me from killing my parents or me. I love hanging out with her, even if she's mad at me. I love watching her get mad at someone when it happens thought. It's not easy to make her mad though. I don't try. We have arguments every now and them, but we haven't found with fists since 2nd grade. We were natural enemies then and after the fight we became besties. We've hung out ever since. She can drive since she is 16. I'm 15 and I haven't gotten my permit yet. I will when I get my car though. Then I'll have to start practicing. Ok so that didn't really tell you why my life sucks, but trust me it does.



24 Comments
You guys can comment you know. It would help me out a lot, I don't mind disagreements or anything. I would love some feed back.
its a great story! Very exciting and well written, i cant see the pictures though.
Ya that's Quibblo. I post them and after a while they disappear. They are back up. Thanks for the comment.
I realized its written like a movie like how it describes the scenes is kinda like a script
I tried to be descriptive to let people know what was going on.
I like it sooooo much iv been checking everyday to see if theres more PLZ write more
soon as i get an ,idea
amazing next!!!!!
nxttttttt its rlly gud
more please
:) I've always love your stories
awww thanks.
boo, lets hear a REAL kidnap story