POEM DIARY: A NEW POEM EVERY WEEK....... TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK
this is my poem diary where i will write a poem for you guys to read every week. tell me if you like them or not. i won't continue it if i dont get at least 10 comments telling me what you think about it..thnx...................BYEEEEEEE X3
You told me you'd never leave me
but that was a lie
you said that you loved me
but you only made me cry
I was about to give my heart to you
instead you ripped it out
now all I can do
Is just scream and shout
I guess I should hate you
but why waste all that energy
when i can use it to love someone
that i know will love me
so i guess this is goodbye
because our breakup was long overdue
but i know that weeks, months, or years from now
i'll still and always love you
but that was a lie
you said that you loved me
but you only made me cry
I was about to give my heart to you
instead you ripped it out
now all I can do
Is just scream and shout
I guess I should hate you
but why waste all that energy
when i can use it to love someone
that i know will love me
so i guess this is goodbye
because our breakup was long overdue
but i know that weeks, months, or years from now
i'll still and always love you
27 Comments
That was really good
I liked it :)
tell me who inspired this so i can go and kill him.
no one inspired this......i made it up....its okay XD
I really liked that
u r sooo good. u make me really jealous... glad no-one inspired it though.
thank you guys. that's really sweet :3
Omg!! I hate you for writing better then me!! Jk jk lol
Girl you are great! Please write more!
I might write a poem about my.....ex.....god I hate saying that :/
You are a very talented writer :D
Hey,it's okay saying your.....ex.Just remember when you see him with another girl,Give your toys to the less fortunate.
thnx bestie. but i do not write better than you.
you are an amazing writer.
im jealous of your writting
Thanks, ;)
I guess since I said you write better and you say I write better we'll just have to call it even lol ;)
holy crap i rly lyk #2 i feel da xcat same way bout a guy