Life As A Sonic Character

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Chapter 45

Troubles

"Manic, why did you want to babysit him so much?" I asked. "No reason...I just like babies." Manic lied. "Tell me the real reason." I commanded. "Well, you know how my mom left me on a little stoop?" Manic asked. "Yeah. So?" I said, wanting him to say something meaningful. "Well, I didn't want this baby to be alone. Someone just took me in right away. I wanted this baby to have a family." Manic said while I was starting to tear up. He really cared! "AW!" I hugged Manic and he blushed. The baby woke up. We realized he was an orange little hedgehog with blue eyes that had streaks of green. "We have to decide what his name is. We can't just keep calling him 'the baby'." I said cradling the baby. "Um, MANIC JR!" Manic exclaimed. "Manic! He isn't even your real kid!" I argued. "How about Jimmy?" I asked. "What? Jimmy?" Manic was confused. "That was my first grade lost webkinz..." I sighed. "Uh okay..." Manic backed a way slowly.
OVER WITH SONIC AND EVERYONE...
"HEY! Sonic hey!" Aaron threw a piece of paper at Sonic's head. "What?" Sonic asked. "I need help with the ladies. You see I only like 1 girl and sh said she like me-" Sonic cut Aaron off. "That narrows it down to not Mo, go on." Sonic said. "Well, I need all the other girls to STOP liking me!" Aaron said. "Who is she?" Sonic asked. "Hannah..." Aaron blushed. "Oh well, just ask Hannah out and all the other girls will know your unavailable and move on." Sonic um...adviced(?) Aaron. "Okay." So Aaron asked Hannah out she said yes blah blah blah...
BACK WITH MANIC AND ME...
"AH! I'VE NEVER CHANGED A DIAPER! I'M THE YOUNGEST!" I yelled. "Neither have I! For when Sonic and Sonia were babies I a) didn't know them and b)was a baby too!" Manic yelled. We did rock paper scissors and Manic lost so he had to change the baby. Surprisingly, he did quite well.
EPILOGUE(ERM NOT EPILOUGE BUT LIKE A LITTLE NOTE) FOR PART 1:
(This is from Shadirby)
We really didn't know much about writing stories when we began part 1 and we wrote really small not really descriptive chapters. Now we like to write more. Sure we had our times(I mean I had mine, Tanic was good with it;}) ) when we got lazy and held it off. Still, I think we were really good with this and I'm excited for Part 2! Thanks for your support everyone! We appreciate it!
-Shadirby

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