Don't Fall Asleep
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Chapter 1
Moving To Elm Street
"AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! LET ME GOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" I was being dragged into my basement.I was kicking and squirming,trying to break free of his grasp.I felt my head banging on the stairs to the basement.Then,the only thing i saw was blood.And then a light.
ok,let me start from the beginning. Hi,my name is Jackie,i'm just an average teenage,girl.And i'm practically hated by everyone in school.Somehow I made it through the packed hallway of teens who im am not friends with.Well, i'm friends with one girl,but she's sort of a nerd......Anyway,i have black hair and blue eyes.I'm 5'7 and now i'm stuck in the worst class ever...........Science!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Everyone practically falls asleep,except me and my only friend,Lacey. Ok,so bla bla bla......my day turns out terrible...you get the picture.
Ok,so this might sound like a bit of a coincedence but,i reacently moved to elm street.Freaky,right? So here i am now,unpacking all my stuff. I managed to get everthing in it's place in only two hours. I ran downstairs into my enormous kitchen.I went to look for something to eat in my refrigerator,but there wasn't much of anything!!!!!!!!! Well,we were still putting things into their places.So i made myself a PB n' J sandwich.Oh,and by the way, I unfortunetly have an annoying 13 yr old brother named Josh. He came charging down the stairs and yelled as loud as he could, "I FINISHED UNPACKING MOOOOOMMMM!" "ok,honey,she replied. He ran up to me and pushed me off my chair. "You idiot! Your 13 yrs old,GROW UP!!!!!!" i yelled at him."sorry,but this pb and j is reeeaaalllyyy gooood!" John smiled with a mouthful of food.GROSS! I thought to myself. i got up and helped my mom unpack things.
Later that night
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I tossed and turned half the night when i FINALLY fell asleep.That's when i had the dream.I was in this circle of fire.i saw a tall figure standing infront of me. he spoke to me,but his voice sounded soooo distant.He sounded like he was miles away from me.He started walking closer to me. HIS SKIN.............ooooohhhhh my gooodness.........all of it.burned.And then i saw two little girls waayy behind him.They were singing a song to me. They were also playing hop scotch. i fell to the floor.The fire started to run up my hair,and i heard the man laughing at me,as if this was all a good thing.
Happily i woke up."WHOAAA." was all i managed to get out of my mouth. I slowly walked over to my brothers room down the hall.Then my mom's.The both of them were sound asleep.Your losin' it Jackie,i thought to myself.I just knew something bad was going to happen to me......i just knew it.
tell me what u think!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ok,let me start from the beginning. Hi,my name is Jackie,i'm just an average teenage,girl.And i'm practically hated by everyone in school.Somehow I made it through the packed hallway of teens who im am not friends with.Well, i'm friends with one girl,but she's sort of a nerd......Anyway,i have black hair and blue eyes.I'm 5'7 and now i'm stuck in the worst class ever...........Science!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Everyone practically falls asleep,except me and my only friend,Lacey. Ok,so bla bla bla......my day turns out terrible...you get the picture.
Ok,so this might sound like a bit of a coincedence but,i reacently moved to elm street.Freaky,right? So here i am now,unpacking all my stuff. I managed to get everthing in it's place in only two hours. I ran downstairs into my enormous kitchen.I went to look for something to eat in my refrigerator,but there wasn't much of anything!!!!!!!!! Well,we were still putting things into their places.So i made myself a PB n' J sandwich.Oh,and by the way, I unfortunetly have an annoying 13 yr old brother named Josh. He came charging down the stairs and yelled as loud as he could, "I FINISHED UNPACKING MOOOOOMMMM!" "ok,honey,she replied. He ran up to me and pushed me off my chair. "You idiot! Your 13 yrs old,GROW UP!!!!!!" i yelled at him."sorry,but this pb and j is reeeaaalllyyy gooood!" John smiled with a mouthful of food.GROSS! I thought to myself. i got up and helped my mom unpack things.
Later that night
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I tossed and turned half the night when i FINALLY fell asleep.That's when i had the dream.I was in this circle of fire.i saw a tall figure standing infront of me. he spoke to me,but his voice sounded soooo distant.He sounded like he was miles away from me.He started walking closer to me. HIS SKIN.............ooooohhhhh my gooodness.........all of it.burned.And then i saw two little girls waayy behind him.They were singing a song to me. They were also playing hop scotch. i fell to the floor.The fire started to run up my hair,and i heard the man laughing at me,as if this was all a good thing.
Happily i woke up."WHOAAA." was all i managed to get out of my mouth. I slowly walked over to my brothers room down the hall.Then my mom's.The both of them were sound asleep.Your losin' it Jackie,i thought to myself.I just knew something bad was going to happen to me......i just knew it.
tell me what u think!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



8 Comments
okay awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AWESOME!!! Its different and I love it!!
awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :::::::::::::DDDDDDDDDDDDD :::::::::::::::::::)
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Um....LOVED IT!!! Continue asap PLEASE!!
I love it! Nexties!(:
Love it!! =) Chapter 4 please!!
Is this based on Nightmare on elm street 2010, or the old one???? good story by the way