breathe
I am Alexandra Campbell, everyone calls me Alex, and my lifes as boring as it gets. im 16 years old and on one saturday, i got up, and went through a normal day. i talked to satah, my best friend, for an hour on the phone, then watched a movie. i went to my grandma's when my cousin went over. when he went home so did i and then my entire life changed.
Chapter 1
The beginning
i was walking around the house to feed the dog, someone was running through the woods behind my house, laughing. "hey! who are you? come over here!" i hollered at the boy! i could now see him well enough to describe him. he was about 17, short, shaggy, blond hair,. skinny and tall. and he was coming toward me. "who are you? i wont hurt you." i said holding out my hand. then run srarted to run away! "no! come back, i swear i wont hurt you! come back!" he paused then turned and started to walk back. finally he was close enough to grab my hand. "who are you?" but instead of answering, he grabbed my hand, and pulled me into the woods.
his blue eyes sparkled as we stepped out into the light. when i saw where we were, it was different then any place i'd seen before. it was kindof like a school without the building. there were kids everywhere. i didnt fit in because all the kids were wearing robes, and i wasnt. we kept walking, still holding hands because i didnt want to lose him in the crowd. when we got about halfway across to the office, i think, he stopped dead in his tracks. he pushed me down and grabbed cement chunks, and started throwing them at a tree looking giant. "this is a barbaden. it has earth magik." hollered the boy while chunking the cement chunks. astonished i looked around. everyone looked surprized. maybe cause i was there, maybe cause it was there, maybe cause since it had magik they do to and the boy wasnt using any!! finally the barbaden fell. by the time i was hiding. he came looking for me. when he found me, under a bench, he helped me up, and said. "sorry bout that. are you hurt?" studdering bout how nervous i was, "n-no im fine" "good" he smiled. he grabbed my hand and started walking back toward the office. he had to go to the restroom, and i kinda had to too. but i just stared at the door. "she's about to go in" said a girl from behind. i turned around to see three girls, about 15, staring at me. smiling, evilly. "go ahead" said the girl in the middle, obviously the leader. "no go ahead" i said knowing something was up. and i started to go back outside. but i stopped, turned, and went back to them. "you know i know what you're trying to do. i've had it done to me before. so id watch it" their smiles faded as they she said, "you do do you?"-pulling out wands-"triwrea-" "NO!!! DONT YOU DARE!!! AMANDA!!!" he ran and put himself between us. shocked and angry amanda said, "TRAVIS?! YOU PROTECT THAT TRASH?!" we had attracted alot of attention. "TRASH!?" hollered travis, "ALEXANDRA IS NOT TRASH!!! THE ONLY TRASH I SEE HERE IS YOU!!!" devestated amanda whispered, "uhh, how can you say that?" "because you were attacked an innocent human. i should report you!" "NO!! please dont!" "then leave her alone or i will!" "oh ok..." tracis grabbed my hand and we walked back into the woods. " h-how did you know my name?" "because you're parents are hollering for you." "crap bye travis" i hollered over my shoulder. "bye alexandra!" i looked back once and i swear i saw a small smile on his lips.
his blue eyes sparkled as we stepped out into the light. when i saw where we were, it was different then any place i'd seen before. it was kindof like a school without the building. there were kids everywhere. i didnt fit in because all the kids were wearing robes, and i wasnt. we kept walking, still holding hands because i didnt want to lose him in the crowd. when we got about halfway across to the office, i think, he stopped dead in his tracks. he pushed me down and grabbed cement chunks, and started throwing them at a tree looking giant. "this is a barbaden. it has earth magik." hollered the boy while chunking the cement chunks. astonished i looked around. everyone looked surprized. maybe cause i was there, maybe cause it was there, maybe cause since it had magik they do to and the boy wasnt using any!! finally the barbaden fell. by the time i was hiding. he came looking for me. when he found me, under a bench, he helped me up, and said. "sorry bout that. are you hurt?" studdering bout how nervous i was, "n-no im fine" "good" he smiled. he grabbed my hand and started walking back toward the office. he had to go to the restroom, and i kinda had to too. but i just stared at the door. "she's about to go in" said a girl from behind. i turned around to see three girls, about 15, staring at me. smiling, evilly. "go ahead" said the girl in the middle, obviously the leader. "no go ahead" i said knowing something was up. and i started to go back outside. but i stopped, turned, and went back to them. "you know i know what you're trying to do. i've had it done to me before. so id watch it" their smiles faded as they she said, "you do do you?"-pulling out wands-"triwrea-" "NO!!! DONT YOU DARE!!! AMANDA!!!" he ran and put himself between us. shocked and angry amanda said, "TRAVIS?! YOU PROTECT THAT TRASH?!" we had attracted alot of attention. "TRASH!?" hollered travis, "ALEXANDRA IS NOT TRASH!!! THE ONLY TRASH I SEE HERE IS YOU!!!" devestated amanda whispered, "uhh, how can you say that?" "because you were attacked an innocent human. i should report you!" "NO!! please dont!" "then leave her alone or i will!" "oh ok..." tracis grabbed my hand and we walked back into the woods. " h-how did you know my name?" "because you're parents are hollering for you." "crap bye travis" i hollered over my shoulder. "bye alexandra!" i looked back once and i swear i saw a small smile on his lips.



5 Comments
dat was good!! i likd it! (1st 1 2 comment!!) make more
ok i will
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Really good!
Just one thing that I notice with a lot of writers on quibblo. Take time to explain the surroundings and story. Don't rush through the whole thing, take your time if you really want it to be good. Sorry I'm kind of a critic. It's really good though :)
its ok! i dont mind ppl critizing me! unlessthey're rude about it!