Fallen Angel Society
The year is 3666. Human kind no longer exists. They have joined the ranks of Demon & Angel. But there are few that fall...
When an Angel falls, they are taken to an Angel society or they are killed by the Demons. Out of 100, 90 of them would make it. The other 10, well, most possibly they'd all die, unless they're extremely lucky.
I'm Saciel, Lieutenant of the Water fraction. I was once one extremely lucky Angel. But, that was long ago.
"Saciel?!"
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"Saciel!" Angeni whispered, gently shacking me. "Pangari wants to see you now."
I groaned in protest, but I got up anyway. I couldn't argue with my sister, afterall. She deffinately lived up to "Angelic". I swiftly walked along the light hallways to the flight balcony. I spread my wings into the air & jumped. My white wings glimered in dawn's light as I flapped & glided through the air towards the Guard tower.
As I flew, a flaming arrow flew past me, inches from my nose. Angeni flew towards me, dodging arrows that flew in dozens. She was struck & fell, noiseless, towards the ground. I dove towards her & carried her to the tower.
"I've got you" I whispered in her little ear. "Don't fear. You'll be alright."
I flew into the tower & placed her, gently, on a couch. I smiled at her delicate, sleeping face. I walked up 2 flights of marble stairs & into a shining room. Oangari was talking to the General, when I walked in.
"Saciel" Pangari said, gently. "I see you got my message"
"I did" I replied. "The demons are attacking. Also, Angeni was shot"
"I'm sorry for her injury" the General said, gruff with sympathy.
"Well, I;ll tell you why your here" Pangari sighed. "We need you to go down to Demon Land"
"What?!" I shouted.
"Listen!" the General growled. "We've lost many people in Demon Land & we've just lost Pangaris' daughter, a junior lieutenant & a young girl"
I sighed.
"Please" Pangari pleaded.
I stood straight. "I will" my wings burst open & I ran out & off the balcony...
I groaned in protest, but I got up anyway. I couldn't argue with my sister, afterall. She deffinately lived up to "Angelic". I swiftly walked along the light hallways to the flight balcony. I spread my wings into the air & jumped. My white wings glimered in dawn's light as I flapped & glided through the air towards the Guard tower.
As I flew, a flaming arrow flew past me, inches from my nose. Angeni flew towards me, dodging arrows that flew in dozens. She was struck & fell, noiseless, towards the ground. I dove towards her & carried her to the tower.
"I've got you" I whispered in her little ear. "Don't fear. You'll be alright."
I flew into the tower & placed her, gently, on a couch. I smiled at her delicate, sleeping face. I walked up 2 flights of marble stairs & into a shining room. Oangari was talking to the General, when I walked in.
"Saciel" Pangari said, gently. "I see you got my message"
"I did" I replied. "The demons are attacking. Also, Angeni was shot"
"I'm sorry for her injury" the General said, gruff with sympathy.
"Well, I;ll tell you why your here" Pangari sighed. "We need you to go down to Demon Land"
"What?!" I shouted.
"Listen!" the General growled. "We've lost many people in Demon Land & we've just lost Pangaris' daughter, a junior lieutenant & a young girl"
I sighed.
"Please" Pangari pleaded.
I stood straight. "I will" my wings burst open & I ran out & off the balcony...
59 Comments
Don't worry, there's gonna be more!!
But, I need support!
If you like it, comment, please!!
If not, comment!!
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That was AWESOME!!!
XD
Seriously.
Only thing I'll say is this:
You seem very creative, but Demon Land sounds a little lame (no offense).
I sort of agree...
But, I was tired!!
^_^
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this story! 5 stars, favourite =)
Thanx.
Much better than your other story
Lovely, Dan!!
LOL
meh it was okay i prefer ur other one
Which one?
Boy Side or Aya's Side?
Where did u get this idea from because its great! I love the begining. Does she have freinds., maybe a demond friend that wants to be an angel or maybe she finds fallen angels and they help her and become friends. Theres so many possibilities i cant wait til the next chapter.
I made it up!
By the way, its a HE.
And, yes, he will find the fallen angels & a foxy vixen!!!
Purr...
LOL
i LOOOOOOVVVEEE it alot. its awesome!!! hehe
Awe, shucks!!!
oh i liked this one better than your other stories this is one of your best
Thank you!!!
I finished chapter 2, there's 2!!!
Sorry for any inconvienience!!!
I didn't spell that right!! -_-
Anyway, more comments to get chapter 3!!!
:P LOL
it was awesome! keep going
I will, don't worry!