The Breaking Point.
This is my first story, and the first chapter isn't very long.
Give me at least 5 comments to continue, please.
"Are you sure we're ready?" I whispered.
"I love you Alea," He replied, giving me soft kiss. "Don't you love me too?"
"Of course, yes, I love you too." I replied.
He took off my pants revealing my bright blue thong. I thought back to how Hailey and I went to Victoria's Secret together, my stomach filled with butterflies with the possibliltily of me losing my virginity to the love of my life.
He pulled down my underwear, and the next thing I knew, I wasn't a little girl anymore.
"I love you Alea," He replied, giving me soft kiss. "Don't you love me too?"
"Of course, yes, I love you too." I replied.
He took off my pants revealing my bright blue thong. I thought back to how Hailey and I went to Victoria's Secret together, my stomach filled with butterflies with the possibliltily of me losing my virginity to the love of my life.
He pulled down my underwear, and the next thing I knew, I wasn't a little girl anymore.
3 Comments
It's very intriguing, I think you could very well, have what it takes to be an epic writer
Next plz:)
haha, okayy, i wanna see if more people like it first thoughh.
should b gd