"In The Distance" another poem I wrote. Hope you enjoy!! (PLEASE READ THE INTRO!!!!!!!)

Starting from my first poem, I've decided to post poems on here about how I've been feeling. I may not get to it everyday, or even every week, but I'll get to it.
And please tell me in comments about what you think of it, what I could improve on, and if you think I'm a good writer. (:
Well, thanks for listening, you seem to be the only one that does (:
Here's the link to my poem (:
http://shadow-born-sky.livejournal.com/841.html