Do you like my poem?

Snow is like my hope for him
Spiraling downward
It was once up high, but it now falls
Falls-falls
Snow is like my hope for him
It reached the ground
But piled up, got higher
Just to let him play in it
Stay in it
Until all the snow melts away
Forever

Snow is like my tears for him
Running down the sky
Running down my face
But never again will I waste my time on him
So as the snow melts, goes away forever,
So do my tears