How can I improve my series?

Please select all that apply.

• Make it more dirty
• Put some action into it (I'm getting there in part 4 or 5 there will be something good)
• DIRTY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
• I haven't read them yet but now I will and tell you the answer later
• DIRTIE BIRDIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
• More clean please (no way but i still wanna know)
• I hate them the way they are!
• Other (tell me in comments please!)