What do you think of my haiku on a scale from 1-10?

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i'll give you each stanza then you rate each one on a scale of 1-10.

  1. 1

    if she could make it/ out of her sullen abyss,/ She would save him, too.

  2. 2

    Both caught in a place/ filled with darkness and torture,/ Killing each other.

  3. 3

    In their darkest nights,/ their only reason to live/ is the other's life.

  4. 4

    Overall, what would you rate it?

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