the black jacket

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THE NIGHT OF HALLOWEEN IS THE NIGHT THE SPIRITS COME OUT OF THEIR GRAVES TO DANCE......

Chapter 1

the black jacket

by: mimiez
The date was October 31, Halloween, handsome-to-die-for Erik was standing in the middle of the gym at his school's Halloween dance. Then out of the corner of his eyes he could see a beautiful girl he'd never seen before. Erik walked over to the beautiful girl to introduce himself. "um hi" said Erik his light brown eyes focused on his "prey", "hey" the girl answer nervously "what's your name I had never seen u before?" asked Erik, "my name is Vivianna, i'm new to town" Vivianna answered. "well do u want to dance" asked Erik "i have a better idea" said Vivianna with a smirk, she grabbed Erik's hand and the both of them ran to Erik's car. Inside the car Vivianna started to kiss Erik, Erik kissed her back, and before they knew it they were undressed, touching each other... By 11:30 they were back in the gym. Exectactly at twelve Vivianna said "Erik, i must go home now" "I'll take you" said Erik, as they were walking out to the parking lot Vivianna said "i'm cold" "here take my jacket" said Erik handing her his black leather jacket. As they arrived to Vivianna's house she thanked Erik for everything "here's your jacket" she said "No, keep it I'll come by tomorrow to pick it up, it gives me an excuse to see u again" he said smiling "okay" she said. after a last long passionate kiss they said goodbye.
-THE NEXT MORNING-
Erik drove up to Vivianna's house and knocked on the door the door opened and he saw a woman who he guessed must have been Viviana's mom may i help you? said the woman "are u Vivianna's mom?'' he asked "yes i am'' she answered "great, look my name is Erik, i met your daughter at the high school Halloween dance, and i let her borrow my jacket she told me to come by today to pick it up. May i please talk to her?" Erik said "is this a joke" the woman asked " um no i met Viviana yesterday at the dance" he said "you couldn't have"said her mom "why not?'' asked Erik "Because my daughter Vivianna died five years ago, on the night of Halloween on her way back from the dance'' said the woman breaking into tears "no,no,no that can't be true" said Erik in disbelief . "Well it's true if you don't believe me, you can come with me to visit her grave" the woman advised "okay" said Erik. Erik stood in front of the grave that read " In loving memory of VIVIANA VENDERWILL 1992-2005- HER SPIRIT SHALL CONTINUE TO DANCE" NO, NO,NO' screamed Erik, he looked down and couldn't believe his eyes. On top of the grave their sat his black leather jacket on top of the jacket was a note Erik picked it up and read "THANKS FOR A WONDERFUL NIGHT ERIK, I'LL NEVER FORGET YOU OR OUR NIGHT TOGETHER I HOPE TO SEE YOU AGAIN- VIVIANNA- PS... HERE'S YOUR JACKET THANKS I'M NOT COLD ANYMORE.......

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mimiez
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