u make me moist
u want something that'll make u hard and make u moist... well here it is :) this is also about love sooo all u squemish this actually isnt that bad... at first
"air...." says sal, "can i talk to you? im not feeling good."
"whats wrong?" air-worried
"wellll ummmmmm i need your help"
"with What???"
"ummmmmm well ya see..." hesitant
"what??? what is it???? ii can prob help" now more worried
sals' hands move towards his cr0ch.... " i think im gáAy. thats y ive been down a lot, its because i feell like im losing my manliness. and i dont like it. it scares me...."
bewildered air says"well ummm u shouldnt.... u shouldnt b afraid of being gAáy, i love gAáy guys..... how am i supposed to help???"
"ummmmmm well i dont wanna--" he stops when he sees my face as a realize.
"ummmm i if understand correctly..... ummm u want me to....??"
"yeah... i mean not all the way but... could u... ummmm...?"
"ur lucky ur a great guy or i would totally reject u right now. ur also lucky that im not sure about my sexXua1ity too sooo this will also help me..."
he hugs me so tight i cant breathe, when he pulls away he has a kinda almost sheepish look to his face.
"whats wrong?" air-worried
"wellll ummmmmm i need your help"
"with What???"
"ummmmmm well ya see..." hesitant
"what??? what is it???? ii can prob help" now more worried
sals' hands move towards his cr0ch.... " i think im gáAy. thats y ive been down a lot, its because i feell like im losing my manliness. and i dont like it. it scares me...."
bewildered air says"well ummm u shouldnt.... u shouldnt b afraid of being gAáy, i love gAáy guys..... how am i supposed to help???"
"ummmmmm well i dont wanna--" he stops when he sees my face as a realize.
"ummmm i if understand correctly..... ummm u want me to....??"
"yeah... i mean not all the way but... could u... ummmm...?"
"ur lucky ur a great guy or i would totally reject u right now. ur also lucky that im not sure about my sexXua1ity too sooo this will also help me..."
he hugs me so tight i cant breathe, when he pulls away he has a kinda almost sheepish look to his face.
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omg pls coment!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
No offense but you need to be more descriptive. like: Air hugged my body tightly. Despite the fact that we were both men, our bodies were like clay. We morphed together. Air kissed me eagerly. "I like you a lot. I want to know if you like me too,"Air said. "I don't know,"I hesitantly said. Air kissed me even more, and pushed me onto the bed. He started to unbotton my shirt, and take my pants and underwear off. "Wait. I'm .. not ready yet." I said. "Don't worry. I'll be gentle. I promise,"Air sai
Air started to take his clothes off too. When I saw his naked body, I gasped. He was hot! His body looked like a sculpture. Every detail was fine and detailed. His arms were big and strong, his abs were neatly in place, no inch of fat anywhere. My body was small and feminine, many mistook my gender whenever they met me. Air kissed my body everywhere. He soon started to lick me. I was shocked. It scared me that it felt good. Then Air started fingering my butt. I was shocked even more.
Oooohh. Sal is a girl?! sorry. Ignore my comments.
Were u trying to make erotica? you're okay but, hopefuly my comments will give you ideas and you'll make better stories. I'm not saying its bad. It just needs some work.
Try to be more formal with writing. You're not texting here and try not to repeat words.
I have no comments ummm reading chapter 2 in 5.4.3.2...........?
I nonononono i'm so confused with this
...Okay then.
nice plz make more i dont think it needs improvement its good cause its yur story so u can make it howevr u want it to b! 8)