My Eclipse With My New Mom(Bree Cross)

My Eclipse With My New Mom(Bree Cross)

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Here is a new Eclipse story, I got the inspiration when an idea just popped into my mind...what if Bree didn't die and was taken home by a member of the Volturi (a new edition to be exact) this member isn't in the movie but she's very powerful and I created her like Victoria created Bree!Comment if you really like...
Bree's New Mother:
Name: Hazel Fevre
DOB:Apr. 5,1987 changed:2010
Eyes: Light Orange
Hair:Red like Hayley Williams
Powers: Very Strong, Can point finger & have someone in pain

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Chapter 1

Spare Her Life or Die By My Hands

by: Kailiee
Bree's POV- They were coming to kill me, I knew it when the nice women and men stood in front of me. I was only 17, I didn't want to die because of Riley's mistake to come here. I should've left but I had nowhere to go, I was dead to everyone I knew. There were 4 people with hoods on and a women with a silk hood that flowed around her body elegantly. They came to a halt and a small girl with red eyes took down her hood and looked to the left and the other 3 removed their hoods, not the women. The girl almost growled with her lip curled in a snarl and she turned and laid her eyes on each one of them. She began to speak in this beautiful voice that I could only feel allured to listen to but the voice spoke of death. Then eyes were upon me and my name was called by the young girl and she stared at me with such intensity and I began to feel pain rushing through my body, making me scream aloud. Stop, I heard a voice with sure authority say into the stillness breaking me from the curse of feeling such black pain. I loved this voice and listened carefully but still shaken by the pain. You have no authority, Aro has given me word to come and solve the problem, Hazel please watch pros do their job, Jane was her name said with power. I was staring at the hooded figure but in a second later I was staring at a beautiful goddess. She had red hair and light orange eyes and her body was breathtaking. She turned to Jane and said No authority, I hear that the Cullens have given her a choice and I wish to help with that choice, so Jane you just Shut Up! and listen to me. I heard a growl erupt from Jane's mouth and I heard gasps from everyone. Come before me Bree, and she said it so sweetly I had to come to her. She held her hands out and stroked my hair and smiled a mind-blowing smile and I fell victim and smiled back. I will take her with me to the mountains where I will be living for the next few years, she said and I was excited but then came a venomous voice. Hell no, she will die before me and we will report back to Caius with the news, Jane spat at her. The vampires beside her tensed for a fight but Hazel was calm and turned to Jane with a hypnotizing smile and said, And who's gonna stop me from making her my immortal daughter, not you I expect because I will end your existence right where you stand if you don't feel my actions are fine because you and Aro can go to hell if you think I will let you kill her because of your mistakes. I heard Wow! and Badazz! from the family behind me and they were taking this in as I was. Jane was pissed now and apparently tired of being pushed around. She said Felix and the man beside her stepped to me but before he had a hand on me Hazel had his throat in her hand and had thrown him across the meadow. The crowd behind me was just as surprised at her strength as I was. He stood up pissed and ran towards her again but before he could touch her she was on top of him biting his neck and then tearing him apart never changing her expression which was in a smirk. After she was done, his body went up in flames from nothing but as she retreated it became obvious she was a Fire element user just like I was a water element user. I think my decision is clear and your job here is done and don't forget to send Caius my best, now leave the Cullens to go back to their lives in the human world and you the vampire world and Jane I always have time to kill one more vampire before I depart, Hazel said before grabbing my hand and waving at the shocked and pissed Jane.
Hazel's POV- Jane was a pain and the Cullens were nice when the Team Volturi left them be. Me and Bree were going to have fun living together in my house in the mountains. The Cullens invited us to their house and I accepted with gracious apologies for the bad behavior. Emmett, the big guy was obsessed with me killing Felix but we who tend to turn against one another must die. Their house was beautiful and they were accompanied by a human- Bella. I've always wanted children and to have Bree as my companion will be nice. I talked with Esme and her two daughters Alice and Rosalie who were very nice. I think we should be going, I said and me and Bree said our goodbyes and left on our journey.

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Kailiee
22, Female
Grand Prairie, TX, US

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