My Guardian Angel
This is just a draft so please tell me what you think and if i should carry on :)
Chapter 1
beginning
When I was younger my mum would call me her little miracle. My mum couldn't have children you see so when she found out she was having me she was so happy. She started to prepare a nursery for me as soon as she got home.
My name is Raven Red but people just call me Red i'm 16 and werid things have starting to happen since my 15th birthday.
I was walking to school down a ally when i heard a whining which must have come form an animal. I had to investigate (sp) it sitting in a box was a husky i couldn't just leave him there. I put him in my coat and ran back home I had to bug my mum for day for her to let me keep him after a couple of days my mum said yes. I called him Jay he soon became very protective of me and would always sleep on my bed.
My name is Raven Red but people just call me Red i'm 16 and werid things have starting to happen since my 15th birthday.
I was walking to school down a ally when i heard a whining which must have come form an animal. I had to investigate (sp) it sitting in a box was a husky i couldn't just leave him there. I put him in my coat and ran back home I had to bug my mum for day for her to let me keep him after a couple of days my mum said yes. I called him Jay he soon became very protective of me and would always sleep on my bed.



5 Comments
u should deffo carry on its good =)
thanks
this is good!!! u should continue
so good carry on please
I like it :)