Its a bank rob story so read it! (i dont have the title.)

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3 friends that have been together sence high school. They live in a little RATTY townhouse.

Chapter 1

act 1 (it is not finished, but please read what i have so far. then leave comments! :))))))

Fade in on John and Fred talking, and listen in on this story.
John :( sitting on the bed) "What’s up?"
Fred :( standing in the door-way) "Nothing much, I just got back from work. Why haven’t you been at work?"
John: "It's Labor Day, the bank is closed."
Fred: "Oh yeah, I totally forgot. Sorry..."
John: "How's your catering bissness doing?"
Fred: "No! This is our worst week yet."
John: "I’ll try to book you for next weeks banquet."
Fred: "Thanks, which will be a big help!"
Sam: "Sorry to interrupt, but we've got a big problem."
John-Fred: "What's wrong?"
Sam: "The banks blue-prints weren't on file."
John: "Luckily for us, I hacked the mane frame and I stole digital blue-prints. I stored them on my Jpod!"(Tossing the jpod to Sam)
Sam: "How are you always one step ahead of everything?"
Fred: (with jealousy) "I guess he's just that awesome!"
Sam: (with anger) "This again? It was on kiss, nothing else happened!"
John: "I'm sorry if you’re still mad about it, but Sam and I have put it behind us and you need to do the same!"
Fred: (with feeling) "Yeah, sorry dude."
John: "it's no problem. We all get jealous..."
Fred: "Jealous? That’s not it at all; I was just looking out for Sam!"
Sam: "Sorry to burst your moment, but we have a robbery to plan!"

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