promise(poem)
Ahh great FML!
As I sit here shaking,
I think of you,
Your the light to my darkness,
The owner of the butterflies in my stomach,
The winner to my heart,
You say you won't hurt me,
But please its a lie,
U love her,
Maybe me,
I know the truth,
Yet I can't let go,
I have no heart,
Because you stole it,
And won't give it back,
As u slowly shred it piece by piece,
U tell me you love me,
I'd die for you,
I'd cry for you,
my soul is pitch black but its getting brighter every minute I talk to you,
Break your promise,
Even if you know I won't be okay
I think of you,
Your the light to my darkness,
The owner of the butterflies in my stomach,
The winner to my heart,
You say you won't hurt me,
But please its a lie,
U love her,
Maybe me,
I know the truth,
Yet I can't let go,
I have no heart,
Because you stole it,
And won't give it back,
As u slowly shred it piece by piece,
U tell me you love me,
I'd die for you,
I'd cry for you,
my soul is pitch black but its getting brighter every minute I talk to you,
Break your promise,
Even if you know I won't be okay
16 Comments
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I think its a okay poem though i think you should work on your wording a bit more to try and get it to flow more. Id read edgar allen poe if i were you. He has amazing dark saddening poems (my favorite being annabelle lee) and it really helps me think about my words when I write my poems. Take my advice or dont but also try and write about bad things that really happen because that also might help.
this is a great poem...it makes you feel the poem instead of reading it...yeah you should read edgar allen poe...or emily dickenson...great write tho
gud poem
That's a good poem....
tht was scary good
amasingly good =] i've got chills
that was good
:( is this about me
Well uh..............no comment!!! Tehe
fabulous da-ling absolutely wonderful :)