My Wonderland adventure

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Ok, so I started this as another story to be shared, but no one wanted to continue it, so I decided that it needed to be finished and to do it myself. If you want to help on the other one just say. I'd really like it if I could finish both.

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Chapter 1

The Fall

It's Halloween and everyone you know is at your house for a fancy dress party. As family tradition, you've gone as Alice, like your sister, since your "descendants of the Original Alice". Your sister is a year older than you and has gone for the girly traditional Alice and you're rocking a darker more modern version. Navy converses,dark blue dress prom dress, and black fingerless lace gloves. Your dancing with your BMA Lewis Trilby a ginger green eye boy, whom you share the same crazy ideas, because you can't find your boyfriend. Lewis is dressed as Roux from Chocolat, a film you both love. After a while you go and look for your BF. You know he's dressed as a knight, but there are so many. He's in your sisters year at school, but he meat you second, so there's no fighting. You see your sister with a knight, but ignore it until his helmet falls off.

You run outside, tears streaming down your face. Voices call after you, Lewis, and some others, but you ignore them. You keep running. You can't see where you're going. Then, you hear a splash. A scream. Your scream. You fell into the pond, lake. You find yourself sinking. The air leaves you lungs, and finally, a last tear.
Then your breathe in. Then out, then in.You stop panicking and feeling sorry for yourself and think. Your breathing like it's normal air.Then you properly look around. You can see the water still,but it's like looking down onto a well, except the water is above you. The wall is dirt, like...
...a rabbit hole. Ok, so you know your house was visited by Lewis Carroll, and your great, great something aunt was called Alice, but it was just a story. Wasn't it?
Nonsense falls around you, up, down, side from side,zig-zaging. Musical instruments play themselves, books read, stuffed animals sing. Cups and keys, plates and dates, crystals and cycles. Then you get bumbed down another hole by a bed. Different holes fall upwards past you. You keep on falling and seeing the most-unusual things. DVD's dancing with videos, pens parachute upwards, and the list goes on.

Finally you hit the floor and pass out.

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