Poetry of a Tragedy
This is simply a few poems I wrote. I've been feeling down lately, and it's just some things that happened several years or months ago. It will probably suck, i'm not much of a poet, but I wish that you enjoy it. NOTE: I will gradually be adding more poems.
Like sharp knives stabbing every part,
Thats how the pain feels,
The taste of it so bitter and tart,
The feeling is just too real,
Your urn sits on a sacred shelf,
Ashes waiting for life,
I simply can't believe myself,
Going through this strife,
Memories course through me like a river,
Thoughts of you in my head,
An orange canine that never shivered,
That I always sung to bed,
An ounce of dachshund blood in your veins,
Corgi was in there too,
I hate to know you were having pains,
When you were to chew,
I don't know why you walked and lay,
Behind the clean tire,
For never could you play,
Yet I still feel so tired,
I visit there plenty of times,
And think of that March day,
I wish I had, yet I didn't,
Kiss my Sweetie Mae
R.I.P. Sweetie Mae, what a wonderful one you were
Thats how the pain feels,
The taste of it so bitter and tart,
The feeling is just too real,
Your urn sits on a sacred shelf,
Ashes waiting for life,
I simply can't believe myself,
Going through this strife,
Memories course through me like a river,
Thoughts of you in my head,
An orange canine that never shivered,
That I always sung to bed,
An ounce of dachshund blood in your veins,
Corgi was in there too,
I hate to know you were having pains,
When you were to chew,
I don't know why you walked and lay,
Behind the clean tire,
For never could you play,
Yet I still feel so tired,
I visit there plenty of times,
And think of that March day,
I wish I had, yet I didn't,
Kiss my Sweetie Mae
R.I.P. Sweetie Mae, what a wonderful one you were
2 Comments
I love the second poem, and you dont suck at poems lol. All they are is expressing your feelings. If you write down exactly how you feel, it will be good. I write poems, I just havent posted any on here. Im new here, so if you wanna check out some of my writing, go ahead. (:
dont rhyme tire with tired. other than that, both of them were really good.