my first poem (please read)
this is a poem that i wrote and it means a lot 2 me :)
you said you will never hurt me
well that was a lie
how can i forgive you
when all you give me is pain
just like how water kills a fire
these tears of mine kill the burning passion i have for you
every time i hear your voice i flinch
waking up screaming because of you
what do you expect? for me to act like nothing happened
i don't regret meeting you i just regret falling for you
what do you expect? for me to fall in love with again
then you must be stupid becuz i am not letting that happen again!!!
well that was a lie
how can i forgive you
when all you give me is pain
just like how water kills a fire
these tears of mine kill the burning passion i have for you
every time i hear your voice i flinch
waking up screaming because of you
what do you expect? for me to act like nothing happened
i don't regret meeting you i just regret falling for you
what do you expect? for me to fall in love with again
then you must be stupid becuz i am not letting that happen again!!!
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love this the same one i read last night hehe i like it
o yeah lol
Awww, it so sad ;(!!! But its an awesome tho!!
LUV IT u should make another
still not sure about that
That was a really good poem!
Only suggestion I'll make is at the end, instead of saying "I am not letting that happen again" you might just want to say "I am not letting that happen" because the repetition of the word "Again" seems a little awkward.
Just my opinion.
Anyways, lovely poem, I hope you'll write more ^^
i think your write... but still thankz for the suggestion :)
sweetness!
thankz again :)
nice poem (:
thankz
GREAT POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
oh thaknz
That was really good
thankz :)
omj i luvvvvvv it
Hey U STOP STEALIN MY POEMS U EVEN SENT IT TO ME if u wanted to use it or something u could've just asked!
I clearly remember writing this in 7th grade cuz its in my journal! Hmm this ones about andrew! But I'm over him now hahaah I'm sorry but the fact that u stole this one makes me giggle!
that's a cool poem :)