This Life (a poem)
This is the poem I wrote for the poetry unit of my English 9 class. Please comment.
This life has its hardships
times of pain and sorrow
This life has its happiness
moments of unspeakable joy
This life is filled with moments that stand out
times that will never, ever repeat themselves
This life is filled with love
the person or things we can't live without
This life is full of laughter
the smiles from people of all ages
This life is full of hate
for those who can't move on
This life is a jar filled with tears of sadness and the sands of time
Our goal, to fill that jar with more sand than water
This life is filled with life
times of pain and sorrow
This life has its happiness
moments of unspeakable joy
This life is filled with moments that stand out
times that will never, ever repeat themselves
This life is filled with love
the person or things we can't live without
This life is full of laughter
the smiles from people of all ages
This life is full of hate
for those who can't move on
This life is a jar filled with tears of sadness and the sands of time
Our goal, to fill that jar with more sand than water
This life is filled with life
4 Comments
that was good!!!
Thanks! ^^
amazing!!!!
loved it