FMA (full metal alchemist) love
ur name: Kira Yagami
Chapter 1
Ed and Al
BOOM what was that kira? "i...i don't know". u say go check it out Russel. (Russle's gone) Flecher where did he go? (flecher's gone) fine i'll go 2 the noise. u think why so we can see eye 2 eye? russel says Oh shut the hell up! some1 says who is this u say im ed. the shorty says and im al. the guy in metal says. Oh crap. u think ed says so why r u using r names? oh and who r u. he says pointing 2 u I'm Winry Rockbell. u say WHAT EVER! ed says shut up shorty or i'll KILL u! u look at flecher and he's scared. so u grab his arm and say " u made him scared why the HELL did u make him scared? i'm sorry. al says u say "u didn't do it ur jerk of a brother did", what did u call me? ed says a jerk u say so he kicks and u dodge "now" u say "ur dead" so u knock him out of the building. u didn't have 2 do that. russel says. i don't care. u say "he needed that". and u all go 2 sleep



2 Comments
lol deathnote name, buh kira killed L T____T
=/ Nice concept but I just can't take it serious with this text talk-ish stuff going on.
PLEASE write itr like an actual book! No,I'm not trying to hurt your feelings or whatever but just a tip to improve.