My Dirty Little Minutes In Heaven (girls only)
Heres a little story I got bored and typed. Hope you enjoy it :) tell me if you like it and I'll continue......how about 4 comments for every new chapte hmm?
Chapter 1
The Game
"I don't wanna do this!" I wispered nervously into my best friends ear. "Yeah," she started "but you have to. Have you seen these guys? They're hot!" Hi, I'm Marilyn. I was at my friends party, and we're suppose to be playing 5 weeks in heaven. "What if I get someone gross?" I ask, unwillingly turning my eyes to a group of obnoxiouse jocks being idiots in the corner of the room. "You know I wont let that happen! In fact," she paused, pulling me closer so no one would hear. "I've got a system worked out so that wont happen" She says, a huge smile spreading acrost her face. "How?" I asked. "We'er gonna put the guys in certain rooms of the house, lock em in, and have the girls draw keys!" I was starting to get the picture "Okay give me my key now, and who the heIl is this guy?" I asked exitedly. "Thats for only me to know, and you to find out. Just dont panic, Okay?" she said taking my hand in what seemed to be a thouhtful jesture, but also sliped me my key. It was just a regular key, with the word "POOL" taped on it. Soon the guys were all running off to they'er designated rooms, and the girls were pulling keys out of a hat, read the lables, and ran off to find the room for the key. I made my way to the back door, and sure enough it clicked with the turn of my key. I already had my bikini on under my tank top and shorts, it was summer after all. I pulled off my tank top, and walked through the door. The first thing that floored me was how bright the moon was, then i looked in the pool.....an oviously hot guy in swim trunks was swimming in my direction, and stoped in mid-stroke when he saw me. "Woah" he slowly gasped. "What?" I asked blushing and turning around to see who had him so googlie eyed. "You....your.....very pretty" He said in almost a stutter. "Oh" was all I said, blushing even redder. "May I join you?" I asked, pulling off my shorts. "Um, yeah, of coarse you can." He looked really nervouse, his hands were a little shaky, and his perfect green eyes were darting up and down my body as I slid into the water. "So whats your name? Or should I call you boy for the next 5 weeks?" I said with a laugh. "Oh" he seemed almost disapointed about something. "I'm Jace" he said, coming closer to me, until our bodies were mere inches apart. "Great to meet you jace," I said with a hard swallow. "My name is....." But I couldn't finish. He was kissing me. TBC



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