Anything But A Typical Fairy-Tale
Prince Ben Daniels is a mixture of 'stereotype' princes. One one hand, he wants to be free and know what it's like to not have so many expectations.
But then again, he loves all the perks of being a prince.
Then, obviously, he meets a regular peasant girl and at the same time, he meets a beautiful princess who is facing the same dilemma as him.
What will happen to Prince Ben Daniels after he meets these two very different girls?
Chapter 1
Meeting her
Frustrated, I sighed angrily before walking briskly out of the palace large, front wooden doors.
At the time, I didn't know where I was going, but maybe, just maybe I did.
I kept my face low and made sure that I looked nobody in the eyes. I knew that the townsfolk would recognize me simultaneously and my small amount of freedom would evaporate.
Obviously by keeping my face down, I wasn't looking where I was going.
As an effect, I bumped into someone and we both stumbled backwards.
I apologized automatically, before daring a look at who I had knocked to the ground.
The girl cocked her head slightly to the side, as if observing me.
Her scrutiny made me uncomfortable so I quickly offered to help her up.
While doing so, I glanced a quick look-over of her.
Her straight brown hair was pulled up in a messy pony-tail and her green eyes searched mine.
I was confused immediately by her. She was very quiet and didn't seem to know me.
I could take advantage of this! The thought struck me with such demand that I shocked myself.
I'm turning more and more into my father...Damn.
"I'm terribly sorry, miss. I wasn't looking where I was going." I apologized again, after releasing her mud-caked hands.
Her pants and shirt were filthy and the only reason I could tell she was a girl was by her stunning beauty.
The girl smiled slightly before she reached her hand out to shake mine.
I hesitated and she withdrew her hand and wiped them on her thigh pant leg.
Then she tried again, a bit nervous this time.
I smiled and hoping I wasn't going to be rude anymore, shook her hand.
The beginning of a friendship? Maybe so, but what will my father and mother say when they find out about this?
Oh what will they say?
At the time, I didn't know where I was going, but maybe, just maybe I did.
I kept my face low and made sure that I looked nobody in the eyes. I knew that the townsfolk would recognize me simultaneously and my small amount of freedom would evaporate.
Obviously by keeping my face down, I wasn't looking where I was going.
As an effect, I bumped into someone and we both stumbled backwards.
I apologized automatically, before daring a look at who I had knocked to the ground.
The girl cocked her head slightly to the side, as if observing me.
Her scrutiny made me uncomfortable so I quickly offered to help her up.
While doing so, I glanced a quick look-over of her.
Her straight brown hair was pulled up in a messy pony-tail and her green eyes searched mine.
I was confused immediately by her. She was very quiet and didn't seem to know me.
I could take advantage of this! The thought struck me with such demand that I shocked myself.
I'm turning more and more into my father...Damn.
"I'm terribly sorry, miss. I wasn't looking where I was going." I apologized again, after releasing her mud-caked hands.
Her pants and shirt were filthy and the only reason I could tell she was a girl was by her stunning beauty.
The girl smiled slightly before she reached her hand out to shake mine.
I hesitated and she withdrew her hand and wiped them on her thigh pant leg.
Then she tried again, a bit nervous this time.
I smiled and hoping I wasn't going to be rude anymore, shook her hand.
The beginning of a friendship? Maybe so, but what will my father and mother say when they find out about this?
Oh what will they say?



16 Comments
GOOD!! =33
What does Prince Charming look like ???? Great start by the way! =]
oooooohhh, awesome!!!!! :)
Kewl! I'm writing a story sorta like this too! I can't wait to see what happens next!!! :O
Yeah I knowz , it inspired me to write this! I loooove your btw! :)
*Story ...Whoopsie Daisy :)
cool beans!!! =D
wonderful :) i loved the description and the point of view :) :)
cuute! next please!
Awesome!
Ahh I love it ! Chapter three please ! :)
Prince Description?
This Is Nice, although I am Not Interested In Romance.
Above All, Nice.
I'm getting to the Prince description.
I just wanted to make him seem a tad mysterious and to make you guys REALLY want to know what he looks like.
Thanks for reading and commenting ! It means alot to me :)