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Pikmin [FAN MADE]
...This is the first story of Pikmin made on this website. It is fan made, NOT based on the game. If you have lots of imagination, make sure to send me a friend request so we could think of something together to make. I stick with the Pikmin already made: Red, Blue, Yellow, White, Purple, and Green Pikmin. I didn't make up colors like pink, brown, grey, etc. And if you want to, don't make too many of them. Maybe make 2 Pikmin or less like that. BE CREATIVE and don't mess it up! Have fun reading!
Well, I know there are a lot of Pikmin in this story, so let's just list the main characters.
Donna- Yellow Pikmin
Elia- White Pikmin
Sarah- Red Pikmin
Jasmine- Purple Pikmin
Me (Juliana)- Blue Pikmin [I AM THE NARRATOR]
Jacquelin [Jackie]- Leader (A.K.A. Captain Olimar)
Abigail (Abby)- Green Pikmin READ COMMENT PLEEEEEEEEEZE!!!!!!!
Well, there are the main characters, and these are real people. They are my friends, and they wanted to be Pikmin just like me! Okay, let's start the story...! Oh, and you know that Pikmin do NOT have houses, okay? Like I said, this is FAN MADE!!
It was 7:30 in the morning when Jackie wakes up and gets out of bed. She-- HE leaves his room, forgetting to make up her-- his bed and goes into the living room to fix a cup of coffee. "Nothing's better than a Sunday morning..." he sighs. "This is a perfect day to go back to Earth, make some money, and pay off my bills..." Jackie puts down the cup of coffee and puts on his space suit and approaches the Dolphin. "...I guess I could do this before I get too hungry for breakfast, and I better make this quick...! The bill is due TODAY!" He goes into the Dolphin, turns on all of the controls, and sets off to Earth.
While Jackie was flying to Earth, he sees ANOTHER comet coming towards him. "AAAAHHHHH, NOOOO!!!!" he screams. "NOT AGAIN!!!!!!" The comet smashes into the Dolphin and down Jackie went all over again, back to Earth. [Oh, no!!! Oh, no!!!] he thought to himself. [What if my life support system malfunctions in 30 days again?!!] From Earth, there were bright lights that looked just like the Dolphin's parts scattering everywhere, like before. Elia looks up into the sky and brings the others to see. "Not again!" Sarah complained. "I'm tired of helping Jackie to rebuild the ship, and I can't do it TWICE now!!" "...This is very awkward," Donna says. "Why did Captain Jackie come back in the first place? I could see it was a coincidence the first time, but the second time??? Something is missing..." "Gosh, Donna!" Elia comments. "You're acting as if you're the total genius!" Last but not least, Jasmine finally arrives where Elia, Donna, and Sarah were. "...N-next time," Jasmine pants, "don't leave me behind...! You people walk too fast-- AAHH!!! A METEOR IS HEADING STRAIGHT FOR US!!!!" The Dolphin crashes right in front of them, making a giant boom, that begins attracting attention. Smoke, sparks, broken metal, etc. was dispersed everywhere and finally, Jackie crawls out of the Dolphin, unharmed. He looks up and sees the Pikmin staring down at him. [I remember these Pikmin! They were the ones who helped me rebuild the ship the first time I crashed here! And now I think they want to help me again!] Just to tell you, whenever you see words inside these [], those are Jackie's thoughts...
"C'mon, Captain Jackie!" Donna complains. "We're tired of helping you with your Dolphin! Now it's YOUR turn to do it yourself! You didn't even try to help us carry those parts either!" [I never knew Pikmin could talk! This is amazing-- Oh, wait. Never mind. They've talked to me before...] "Shouldn't we deserve something good since we helped you with your Dolphin last time?!" Elia adds. "I mean, we deserve something for our hard work, and all you did was leave right after you had all of your parts!" "Whoa, whoa!!" Jackie yells. "I never asked you to help me with the Dolphin...! Y'all just started to follow me as captain, and then I had the idea of using all of you to rebuild my ship! Did you hear me say anything about rewarding you after you found all of my ship parts?! Anyway, I don't know why you are asking to be rewarded Elia and Jasmine! You never helped me rebuild the ship in the first place!!" "So you expect us to help you again?!" Sarah interrupts. "If you never asked us to help you last time, then we decide if we want to help you this time! And I don't feel like it!" "WHAT!?!?!!?" Jackie screams. "YOU'RE SUPPOSED TO DO WHAT I SAY!! WHAT MAKES YOU THINK THAT YOU COULD DO WHATEVER YOU CAN NOW?!!" "BECAUSE YOU JUST SAID THAT WE DIDN'T HAVE TO HELP YOU LAST TIME!!!!" Elia finally speaks up. "BOTH OF YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" she screams. "Maybe if we help him again, then he will reward us this time!!"
"I MAKE THE RULES AROUND HERE!! ELIA, GET BACK IN YOUR ONION!!" Jackie scolds. "I don't even have an onion!!" Elia says. "How dare you defy your captain!?!?!" "You can't make me do anything!" Jackie starts to looks around him. He asks, "Are you all the only Pikmin here?" The others just stare at him stupidly. "I thought that all of this noise would attract Bulb--" Just then, a red spotted Bulborb jumps out of the bushes. "GGGGRRRRAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" It yells out. "AAAAAAHHHH!!!!!!! RUN!!!!!!!!!!" The Pikmin and Jackie say all at once. The Bulborb turns around and sees Juliana narrating the story. OH, CRAP! THAT'S ME!!!! RUN!!!!!!!
Bulborb: GGGRRRRRAAAAAAAAH-- W-wait a minute. This story is fan made, right?
Donna, Sarah, Jasmine, Elia, Juliana, Jackie: .........
Bulborb: YES!! Now I could finally express my feelings in words!!
Jackie: If this is fan made, then we could do what we want, right?!
Elia: ...
Juliana: This IS fan made! This IS my story, you know! So I could make anything happen to anyone!!
Sarah: You know, writing the story this way is making it look cheap. Let's continue with the action--
The red Bulborb dashes towards Donna but misses and falls down on the ground.
Donna: KILL HIM!!!!!!!!!
Juliana: ...THIS STORY IS GETTING CHEAP!!! THIS IS MY STORY, AND I DECIDE WHAT ALL OF YOU DO!!!!!
Just then, the background turns black and everyone was floating in empty space. The Bulborb vanishes all of a sudden.
Juliana: NOW!! I order everyone to do what I please!! JACKIE!! I am now captain!
Jackie: HOW DARE YOU ORDER ME AROUND--
A white hole appears under Jackie and he starts falling through it. Then it closes up.
Jackie: AAAAAHHH!!!!! I'M GONNA DIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!
He falls on something rather soft and huge. He looks around and sees a giant baby reaching its hands toward him.
Jackie: AAH!!! A HUGE BABY!!!
The baby squeezes the breath out of him and swings him around in the air. Finally the baby throws Jackie out of its crib and he lands on the carpet. The baby stands up in its crib, crying and reaching its hands out for Jackie.
Jackie: After I escape from this place, I'm gonna--
The front door opens up and an ugly dog sprints into the house, coming right for Jackie.
Jackie: PLEASE, JULIANA!!!!!!! I DON'T WANNA DIE!!!!!!!! GIVE ME ANOTHER CHANCE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The background around Jackie goes black again, and he was right where he was before he fell through the hole.
Juliana: I'm going to end this story right now and everybody will listen to my commands!!!
A voice was heard in the background...
???: Actually, this story just begun... once Juliana becomes one of us, this story will burst into flames...
Juliana: WHO'S THERE!?!?!!!!
Elia: Don't pretend that you don't know, Juliana!! You control everything that happens in this story!!
Donna, Jasmine, Sarah, and Jackie: OUR LIVES ARE OVER!! JUST MAKE US DISAPPEAR!!
The background turns into a grassy savanna, and A LOT of Mushroom Pikmin were surrounding Elia, Juliana, Donna, Sarah, and Jackie [they don't go near Jasmine because they know they will get pwnd.]
Mushroom Pikmin: This story is now under OUR control!! And we will destroy ALL OF YOU!!!
TO BE CONTINUED...
I hoped you liked this chapter! There's even more action in the next!!
Donna- Yellow Pikmin
Elia- White Pikmin
Sarah- Red Pikmin
Jasmine- Purple Pikmin
Me (Juliana)- Blue Pikmin [I AM THE NARRATOR]
Jacquelin [Jackie]- Leader (A.K.A. Captain Olimar)
Abigail (Abby)- Green Pikmin READ COMMENT PLEEEEEEEEEZE!!!!!!!
Well, there are the main characters, and these are real people. They are my friends, and they wanted to be Pikmin just like me! Okay, let's start the story...! Oh, and you know that Pikmin do NOT have houses, okay? Like I said, this is FAN MADE!!
It was 7:30 in the morning when Jackie wakes up and gets out of bed. She-- HE leaves his room, forgetting to make up her-- his bed and goes into the living room to fix a cup of coffee. "Nothing's better than a Sunday morning..." he sighs. "This is a perfect day to go back to Earth, make some money, and pay off my bills..." Jackie puts down the cup of coffee and puts on his space suit and approaches the Dolphin. "...I guess I could do this before I get too hungry for breakfast, and I better make this quick...! The bill is due TODAY!" He goes into the Dolphin, turns on all of the controls, and sets off to Earth.
While Jackie was flying to Earth, he sees ANOTHER comet coming towards him. "AAAAHHHHH, NOOOO!!!!" he screams. "NOT AGAIN!!!!!!" The comet smashes into the Dolphin and down Jackie went all over again, back to Earth. [Oh, no!!! Oh, no!!!] he thought to himself. [What if my life support system malfunctions in 30 days again?!!] From Earth, there were bright lights that looked just like the Dolphin's parts scattering everywhere, like before. Elia looks up into the sky and brings the others to see. "Not again!" Sarah complained. "I'm tired of helping Jackie to rebuild the ship, and I can't do it TWICE now!!" "...This is very awkward," Donna says. "Why did Captain Jackie come back in the first place? I could see it was a coincidence the first time, but the second time??? Something is missing..." "Gosh, Donna!" Elia comments. "You're acting as if you're the total genius!" Last but not least, Jasmine finally arrives where Elia, Donna, and Sarah were. "...N-next time," Jasmine pants, "don't leave me behind...! You people walk too fast-- AAHH!!! A METEOR IS HEADING STRAIGHT FOR US!!!!" The Dolphin crashes right in front of them, making a giant boom, that begins attracting attention. Smoke, sparks, broken metal, etc. was dispersed everywhere and finally, Jackie crawls out of the Dolphin, unharmed. He looks up and sees the Pikmin staring down at him. [I remember these Pikmin! They were the ones who helped me rebuild the ship the first time I crashed here! And now I think they want to help me again!] Just to tell you, whenever you see words inside these [], those are Jackie's thoughts...
"C'mon, Captain Jackie!" Donna complains. "We're tired of helping you with your Dolphin! Now it's YOUR turn to do it yourself! You didn't even try to help us carry those parts either!" [I never knew Pikmin could talk! This is amazing-- Oh, wait. Never mind. They've talked to me before...] "Shouldn't we deserve something good since we helped you with your Dolphin last time?!" Elia adds. "I mean, we deserve something for our hard work, and all you did was leave right after you had all of your parts!" "Whoa, whoa!!" Jackie yells. "I never asked you to help me with the Dolphin...! Y'all just started to follow me as captain, and then I had the idea of using all of you to rebuild my ship! Did you hear me say anything about rewarding you after you found all of my ship parts?! Anyway, I don't know why you are asking to be rewarded Elia and Jasmine! You never helped me rebuild the ship in the first place!!" "So you expect us to help you again?!" Sarah interrupts. "If you never asked us to help you last time, then we decide if we want to help you this time! And I don't feel like it!" "WHAT!?!?!!?" Jackie screams. "YOU'RE SUPPOSED TO DO WHAT I SAY!! WHAT MAKES YOU THINK THAT YOU COULD DO WHATEVER YOU CAN NOW?!!" "BECAUSE YOU JUST SAID THAT WE DIDN'T HAVE TO HELP YOU LAST TIME!!!!" Elia finally speaks up. "BOTH OF YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" she screams. "Maybe if we help him again, then he will reward us this time!!"
"I MAKE THE RULES AROUND HERE!! ELIA, GET BACK IN YOUR ONION!!" Jackie scolds. "I don't even have an onion!!" Elia says. "How dare you defy your captain!?!?!" "You can't make me do anything!" Jackie starts to looks around him. He asks, "Are you all the only Pikmin here?" The others just stare at him stupidly. "I thought that all of this noise would attract Bulb--" Just then, a red spotted Bulborb jumps out of the bushes. "GGGGRRRRAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" It yells out. "AAAAAAHHHH!!!!!!! RUN!!!!!!!!!!" The Pikmin and Jackie say all at once. The Bulborb turns around and sees Juliana narrating the story. OH, CRAP! THAT'S ME!!!! RUN!!!!!!!
Bulborb: GGGRRRRRAAAAAAAAH-- W-wait a minute. This story is fan made, right?
Donna, Sarah, Jasmine, Elia, Juliana, Jackie: .........
Bulborb: YES!! Now I could finally express my feelings in words!!
Jackie: If this is fan made, then we could do what we want, right?!
Elia: ...
Juliana: This IS fan made! This IS my story, you know! So I could make anything happen to anyone!!
Sarah: You know, writing the story this way is making it look cheap. Let's continue with the action--
The red Bulborb dashes towards Donna but misses and falls down on the ground.
Donna: KILL HIM!!!!!!!!!
Juliana: ...THIS STORY IS GETTING CHEAP!!! THIS IS MY STORY, AND I DECIDE WHAT ALL OF YOU DO!!!!!
Just then, the background turns black and everyone was floating in empty space. The Bulborb vanishes all of a sudden.
Juliana: NOW!! I order everyone to do what I please!! JACKIE!! I am now captain!
Jackie: HOW DARE YOU ORDER ME AROUND--
A white hole appears under Jackie and he starts falling through it. Then it closes up.
Jackie: AAAAAHHH!!!!! I'M GONNA DIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!
He falls on something rather soft and huge. He looks around and sees a giant baby reaching its hands toward him.
Jackie: AAH!!! A HUGE BABY!!!
The baby squeezes the breath out of him and swings him around in the air. Finally the baby throws Jackie out of its crib and he lands on the carpet. The baby stands up in its crib, crying and reaching its hands out for Jackie.
Jackie: After I escape from this place, I'm gonna--
The front door opens up and an ugly dog sprints into the house, coming right for Jackie.
Jackie: PLEASE, JULIANA!!!!!!! I DON'T WANNA DIE!!!!!!!! GIVE ME ANOTHER CHANCE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The background around Jackie goes black again, and he was right where he was before he fell through the hole.
Juliana: I'm going to end this story right now and everybody will listen to my commands!!!
A voice was heard in the background...
???: Actually, this story just begun... once Juliana becomes one of us, this story will burst into flames...
Juliana: WHO'S THERE!?!?!!!!
Elia: Don't pretend that you don't know, Juliana!! You control everything that happens in this story!!
Donna, Jasmine, Sarah, and Jackie: OUR LIVES ARE OVER!! JUST MAKE US DISAPPEAR!!
The background turns into a grassy savanna, and A LOT of Mushroom Pikmin were surrounding Elia, Juliana, Donna, Sarah, and Jackie [they don't go near Jasmine because they know they will get pwnd.]
Mushroom Pikmin: This story is now under OUR control!! And we will destroy ALL OF YOU!!!
TO BE CONTINUED...
I hoped you liked this chapter! There's even more action in the next!!
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I apologize to EVERYONE who loves Pikmin... I was so ignorant that I thought green Pikmin were real, because I was looking up Pikmin in Google images, and some green Pikmin popped up. I thought they were real, so that's why I put "Abby: Green Pikmin".
I REPEAT, I AM SORRY FOR ALL PIKMIN FANS. FORGIVE ME...